Package: adjtimex
Version: 1.29-9
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

  Summary:

Add a missing left italic correction.

Add a missing right italic correction.

Separate an ellipsis from the preceding string with
a space.

Have two spaces between sentences.

Protect . if not an end of sentence.

Change a two-fonts macro to an one-font macro for a
single argument or add a second argument ("") for 'RX'.

Correct a name for an option (logfile -> log).

Use a macro instead of an escape for font changes.

Use "to" instead of '...' for a range.

Add a comma after "etc."

Remove space at end of lines.

Use (in)valid instead of "(il)legal" (GNU coding standard).

Delete repeated words ("using using").

Split long lines (> 80).

Add zero ('0') to a decimal number if it begins with a period (example: .1 ->
0.1).

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  Patch is in the attachment.

-- System Information:
Debian Release: buster/sid
  APT prefers stable-updates
  APT policy: (500, 'stable-updates'), (500, 'proposed-updates'), (500, 
'testing'), (500, 'stable')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)

Kernel: Linux 4.9.88-1-u1 (SMP w/2 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=is_IS.iso88591, LC_CTYPE=is_IS.iso88591 (charmap=ISO-8859-1), 
LANGUAGE=is_IS.iso88591 (charmap=ISO-8859-1)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
Init: sysvinit (via /sbin/init)

Versions of packages adjtimex depends on:
ii  debconf [debconf-2.0]  1.5.67
ii  init-system-helpers    1.51
ii  libc6                  2.27-3
ii  lsb-base               9.20170808

adjtimex recommends no packages.

Versions of packages adjtimex suggests:
ii  ntpdate  1:4.2.8p11+dfsg-1

-- Configuration Files:
/etc/init.d/adjtimex changed [not included]

-- debconf information excluded

-- 
Bjarni I. Gislason
--- adjtimex.8  2016-10-29 11:56:42.000000000 +0000
+++ adjtimex.8.new      2018-06-24 16:43:49.000000000 +0000
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ adjtimex \- display or set the kernel ti
 .SH SYNOPSIS
 .ad l
 .\" commands only
-\fBadjtimex\fP [\fIoption\fP]...
+\fBadjtimex\fP [\,\fIoption \/\fR...]
 .\"}}}
 .\"{{{  Config
 .SH DESCRIPTION
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ automatically update the hardware clock
 .PP
 In addition, \fBhwclock\fP(8) can be used to approximately correct for a
 constant drift in the hardware clock.  In this case, "hwclock
-\-\-adjust" is run occasionally. \fBhwclock\fP notes how long it has
+\-\-adjust" is run occasionally.  \fBhwclock\fP notes how long it has
 been since the last adjustment, and nudges the hardware clock forward
 or back by the appropriate amount.  The user needs to set the time
 with "hwclock \-\-set" several times over the course of a few days so
@@ -89,8 +89,8 @@ follow.
 .RI \-S " status"
 .RI \-\-status " status"
 .RI \-m " val"
-.RI \-R
-.RI \-\-reset
+.RB \-R "" \" "R" is not a macro in "groff"
+.RB \-\-reset ""
 .RI \-\-maxerror " val"
 .RI \-e " val"
 .RI \-\-esterror " val"
@@ -106,13 +106,14 @@ follow.
 .RI \-i " tim"
 .RI \-\-interval " tim"
 .RI \-l " file"
-.RI \-\-logfile " file"
+.RI \-\-log= file
 .RI \-h " timeserver"
 .RI \-\-host " timeserver"
 \-w
 \-\-watch
-\-r[\fIfile\fP]
-\-\-review[=\fIfile\fP]
+.RI -r[ file ]
+\-\-review[=\,\fIfile\/\fP]
+.RI \-\-review[= file ]
 \-u
 \-\-utc
 \-d
@@ -169,7 +170,7 @@ for each kernel tick interrupt.  For a k
 are supposed to be 100 ticks per second, so \fIval\fP should be close
 to 10000.  Increasing \fIval\fP by 1 speeds up the system clock by
 about 100 ppm, or 8.64 sec/day.  \fItick\fP must be in the range
-900000/USER_HZ...1100000/USER_HZ.  If \fIval\fP is rejected by the
+900000/USER_HZ to 1100000/USER_HZ.  If \fIval\fP is rejected by the
 kernel, \fBadjtimex\fP will determine the acceptable range through
 trial and error and print it.  (After completing the search, it will
 restore the original value.)
@@ -178,7 +179,7 @@ Set the system clock frequency offset to
 can be negative or positive, and gives a much finer adjustment than
 the \fB\-\-tick\fP switch.  When USER_HZ=100, the value is scaled such
 that \fInewfreq\fP = 65536 speeds up the system clock by about 1 ppm,
-or .0864 sec/day.  Thus, all of these are about the same:
+or 0.0864 sec/day.  Thus, all of these are about the same:
 .nf
      \fB\-\-tick  9995 \--frequency  32768000\fP
      \fB\-\-tick 10000 \--frequency         0\fP
@@ -187,7 +188,7 @@ or .0864 sec/day.  Thus, all of these ar
      \fB\-\-tick 10005 \--frequency \-32768000\fP
 .fi
 To see the acceptable range for \fInewfreq\fP, use \-\-print and look at
-"tolerance", or try an illegal value (e.g. \-\-tick 0).
+"tolerance", or try an invalid value (e.g., \-\-tick 0).
 .IP "\fB\-s\fP \fIadj\fP, \fB\-\-singleshot\fP \fIadj\fP"
 Slew the system clock by \fIadj\fP usec.  
 (Its rate is changed temporarily by about 1 part in 2000.)
@@ -198,9 +199,9 @@ notes how long it has been since the las
 and then adjusts the frequency offset to correct for the apparent drift.  
 .\"The short range of this parameter makes it almost 
 .\"totally useless except for use with ntpd:
-\fIadj\fP must be in the range \-512000...512000.
+\fIadj\fP must be in the range \-512000 to 512000.
 .IP "\fB\-S\fP \fIstatus\fP, \fB\-\-status\fP \fIstatus\fP"
-Set kernel system clock status register to value \fIstatus\fP. Look here
+Set kernel system clock status register to value \fIstatus\fP.  Look here
 above at the \fB\-\-print\fP switch section for the meaning of
 \fIstatus\fP, depending on your kernel.
 .IP "\fB\-R\fP, \fB\-\-reset\fP"
@@ -234,7 +235,9 @@ They are merely made available to user p
 .IP "\fB\-T\fP \fIval\fP, \fB\-\-timeconstant\fP \fIval\fP"
 Set phase locked loop (PLL) time constant. 
 \fIval\fP determines the bandwidth or "stiffness"
-of the PLL.  The effective PLL time constant will be a multiple of 
(2^\fIval\fP).  For room\-temperature quartz
+of the PLL.  The effective PLL time constant will be a multiple of
+.RI (2^ val ).
+For room\-temperature quartz
 oscillators, David Mills recommends the value 2,
 which corresponds
 to a PLL time constant of about 900 sec and a maximum update interval
@@ -249,7 +252,7 @@ in accuracy.
 Periodically compare the system clock with the CMOS clock.  After the
 first two calls, print values for tick and frequency offset that would
 bring the system clock into approximate agreement with the CMOS clock.
-CMOS clock readings are adjusted for systematic drift using using the
+CMOS clock readings are adjusted for systematic drift using the
 correction in \fI/etc/adjtime\fP \(em see \fBhwclock\fP(8).  The
 interval between comparisons is 10 seconds, unless changed by the
 \fB\-\-interval\fP switch.  The optional argument is the number of
@@ -277,26 +280,26 @@ The CMOS clock is set to UTC (universal
 .IP "\fB\-d\fP, \fB\-\-directisa\fP"
 To read the CMOS clock accurately, \fBadjtimex\fP usually accesses the
 clock via the /dev/rtc device driver of the kernel, and makes use of its
-CMOS update-ended interrupt to detect the beginning of seconds. It
+CMOS update-ended interrupt to detect the beginning of seconds.  It
 will also try /dev/rtc0 (for udev), /dev/misc/rtc (for the obsolete
 devfs) and possibly others.  When the
 /dev/rtc driver is absent, or when the interrupt is not available,
 \fBadjtimex\fP can sometimes automatically fallback to a direct access
-method. This method detects the start of seconds by polling the
-update\-in\-progress (UIP) flag of the CMOS clock. You can force this
+method.  This method detects the start of seconds by polling the
+update\-in\-progress (UIP) flag of the CMOS clock.  You can force this
 direct access to the CMOS chip with the \fB\-\-directisa\fP switch.
 
 Note that the /dev/rtc interrupt method is more accurate, less sensible
 to perturbations due to system load, cleaner, cheaper, and is generally
-better than the direct access method. It is advisable to not use the
+better than the direct access method.  It is advisable to not use the
 \fB\-\-directisa\fP switch, unless the CMOS chip or the motherboard
 don't properly provide the necessary interrupt.
 .IP "\fB\-n\fP, \fB\-\-nointerrupt\fP"
 Force immediate use of busywait access method, without first waiting
 for the interrupt timeout.
-.IP "\fB\-l\fP[\fIfile\fP], \fB\-\-log\fP[\fB=\fP\fIfile\fP]"
+.IP "\fB\-l\fP[\,\fIfile\/\fP], \fB\-\-log\fP[\fB=\fP\,\fIfile\/\fP]"
 Save the current values of the system and CMOS clocks, and optionally
-a reference time, to \fIfile\fP (default \fI/var/log/clocks.log\fP).
+a reference time, to \fIfile\fP (default \fI/var/log/clocks.log\/\fP).
 The reference time is taken from a network timeserver (see the
 \fB\-\-host\fP switch) or supplied by the user (see the \fB\-\-watch\fP
 switch).
@@ -309,7 +312,7 @@ Protocol (NTP) server, or if that server
 Ask for a keypress when the user knows the time, then ask what that
 time was, and its approximate accuracy.  Implies \fB\-\-log\fP.
 .IP "\fB\-r\fP[\fIfile\fP], \fB\-\-review\fP[\fB=\fP\fIfile\fP]"
-Review the clock log \fIfile\fP (default \fI/var/log/clocks.log\fP)
+Review the clock log \fIfile\fP (default \fI/var/log/clocks.log\/\fP)
 and estimate, if possible, the rates of the CMOS and system clocks.
 Calculate least\-squares rates using all suitable log entries.  Suggest
 corrections to adjust for systematic drift.  With \fB\-\-adjust\fP, the
@@ -321,7 +324,6 @@ Increase verbosity.
 Print the program options.
 .IP "\fB\-v\fP, \fB\-\-version\fP"
 Print the program version.
-.PP
 .\"}}}
 .\"{{{  Examples
 .SH EXAMPLES
@@ -335,7 +337,6 @@ in rc.local would approximately correct
 .nf
      adjtimex  \-\-tick 9999  \-\-freq 485452
 .fi
-.PP
 .\"}}}
 .\"{{{  Notes
 .SH NOTES
@@ -345,15 +346,21 @@ see \fBhwclock\fP(8).
 .\"}}}
 .\"{{{  Author
 .SH AUTHORS
-Steven S. Dick <ssd at nevets.oau.org>, 
+Steven S.\& Dick <ssd at nevets.oau.org>, 
 Jim Van Zandt <jrv at comcast.net>.
 .\"}}}
 .\"{{{  See also
 .SH "SEE ALSO"
 .BR date "(1L), " gettimeofday "(2), " settimeofday "(2), " 
-.BR hwclock "(8), " ntpdate "(8), " ntpd "(8), "
-\fI/usr/src/linux/include/linux/timex.h,
-/usr/src/linux/include/linux/sched.h,
-/usr/src/linux/kernel/time.c,
-/usr/src/linux/kernel/sched.c\fP
+.BR hwclock "(8), " ntpdate "(8), " ntpd "(8)."
+.br
+Files in the directory
+.IR /usr/src/linux/include/linux :
+.br
+.IR timex.h ", " sched.h
+.br
+in the directory
+.IR /usr/src/linux/kernel :
+.br
+.IR time.c ", " sched.c .
 .\"}}}

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