Package: deborphan
Version: 1.7.30
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

  The patch is in the attachment.

  Summary:

Change -- in x--y to \(em (em-dash), or, if an
option, to "\-\-".

Add a comma (or \&) after "e.g." and "i.e.", or use English words.

Begin a sentence on a new line or have two space characters between
sentences.

Split long lines (> 80).

Add a missing italic correction or use a macro.

###

  Details:

Input file is orphaner.8

Test nr. 13:

Change -- in x--y to \(em (em-dash), or, if an
option, to \-\-

50:and less important, you need to use \fB--priority=optional\fP (i.e. with the 
\fB=\fP

#####

Test nr. 21:

Use a macro to change to the italic font, instead of \fI [1], if
possible.
The macros have the italic corrections, but "\c" removes them.

  Or

add the italic corrections.
[1] man-pages(7) [package "manpages"]

10:\fBorphaner\fP [\fB\-\-help\fP|\fB\-\-purge\fP] [\fIdeborphan options\fP]

#####

Test nr. 40:

Add a comma (or \&) after "e.g." and "i.e.", or use English words
(man-pages(7) [package "manpages"]).

50:and less important, you need to use \fB--priority=optional\fP (i.e. with the 
\fB=\fP

#####

Test nr. 41:

Wrong distance between sentences or protect the indicator.

1) Separate the sentences and subordinate clauses; each begins on a new
line.  See man-pages(7) [package "manpages"] and "info groff".

Or

2) Adjust space between sentences (two spaces),

3) or protect the indicator by adding "\&" after it.

The "indicator" is an "end-of-sentence character" (.!?).

15:of orphaned packages with dialog or whiptail. Packages may be
17:work. After removal a new list of orphaned packages is gathered
18:from deborphan. The program ends when either `Cancel' is pressed
26:shows the result that would appear after real removing. So you can see
50:and less important, you need to use \fB--priority=optional\fP (i.e. with the 
\fB=\fP

#####

Test nr. 42:

Split lines longer than 80 characters into two or more lines.
Appropriate break points are the end of a sentence and a subordinate
clause; after punctuation marks

orphaner.8: line 50     length 84
and less important, you need to use \fB--priority=optional\fP (i.e. with the 
\fB=\fP

#####

-- System Information:
Debian Release: buster/sid
  APT prefers stable-updates
  APT policy: (500, 'stable-updates'), (500, 'proposed-updates'), (500, 
'testing'), (500, 'stable')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)

Kernel: Linux 4.9.110-3 (SMP w/2 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=is_IS.iso88591, LC_CTYPE=is_IS.iso88591 (charmap=ISO-8859-1), 
LANGUAGE=is_IS.iso88591 (charmap=ISO-8859-1)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
Init: sysvinit (via /sbin/init)

Versions of packages deborphan depends on:
ii  libc6  2.27-5

Versions of packages deborphan recommends:
ii  apt           1.6.3
pn  dialog        <none>
ii  gettext-base  0.19.8.1-6+b1

deborphan suggests no packages.

-- no debconf information

-- 
Bjarni I. Gislason
--- orphaner.8  2018-07-26 11:14:06.000000000 +0000
+++ orphaner.8.new      2018-07-31 23:46:49.000000000 +0000
@@ -7,15 +7,15 @@ orphaner \- frontend for deborphan
 
 .SH SYNOPSIS
 .LP
-\fBorphaner\fP [\fB\-\-help\fP|\fB\-\-purge\fP] [\fIdeborphan options\fP]
+\fBorphaner\fP [\fB\-\-help\fP|\fB\-\-purge\fP] [\,\fIdeborphan options\fP\/]
 
 .SH DESCRIPTION
 .LP
 \fBorphaner\fR is a neat frontend for \fBdeborphan\fP displaying a list
-of orphaned packages with dialog or whiptail. Packages may be
+of orphaned packages with dialog or whiptail.  Packages may be
 selected for removal with \fBapt\-get\fP which is then called to do the
-work. After removal a new list of orphaned packages is gathered
-from deborphan. The program ends when either `Cancel' is pressed
+work.  After removal a new list of orphaned packages is gathered
+from deborphan.  The program ends when either `Cancel' is pressed
 or no package is marked for removal.
 
 After you removed a package, all new orphaned packages are shown at the
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ top of the list separated by +++++ from
 
 Orphaner also shows two additional buttons: `Simulate' and `Help'.
 `Simulate' does like its name suggest only a simulation of removing and
-shows the result that would appear after real removing. So you can see
+shows the result that would appear after real removing.  So you can see
 the packages, which will become orphaned and you can select them and
 remove all packages with one \fBapt\-get\fR call.
 
@@ -47,8 +47,8 @@ These options are passed to \fBdeborphan
 to manage the keep file, and switches to change the output format.  Note
 that switches which take an argument need to passed as one argument to
 \fBorphaner\fP.  For instance to only show packages of priority \fIoptional\fP
-and less important, you need to use \fB--priority=optional\fP (i.e. with the 
\fB=\fP
-sign, not with a space).
+and less important, you need to use \fB\-\-priority=optional\fP
+(i.e., with the \fB=\fP sign, not with a space).
 
 .SH SEE ALSO
 

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