Hi,

Thank you for your feedback!

I've updated package description.

* Simplify short description.
* Fix list style

On Sat, 8 Sep 2018 20:54:33 +0900 Hideki Yamane <henr...@iijmio-mail.jp> wrote:
> On Sat, 8 Sep 2018 20:30:09 +0900
> Kentaro Hayashi <haya...@clear-code.com> wrote:
> > Could you review it again, @henrich?
>
> > Description: Commandline utility to control Audio and Music units on 
> > FireWire(IEEE1394)
>
> "Utilities to control Audio and Music units on FireWire (IEEE1394)"

Fixed.

> > This package contains the following CUI tools.
>
> You should repeat package overview at first.
>
> "hinawa-utils are utilities to control Audio and Music units on FireWire 
> (IEEE1394) and it contains below command line tools."
>
> > * hinawa-bebob-parser
> > * Plug structure parser for BeBoB firmware
> > * hinawa-config-rom-printer
> > * A lexer/parser of configuration ROM on FireWire
>
> It would be better to describe below style
>
snip
> * foobar
> - blablabla
>

Fixed to the second style.

Regards,

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