Package: lilo
Version: 1:24.2-4
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

Dear Maintainer,

the compressed patch is in the attachment (uncompressed 722 lines).

Main issues:

Input file is lilo.conf.5

mandoc: Remove whitespace at end of input file

mandoc: lilo.conf.5:990:4: STYLE: unterminated quoted argument
mandoc: lilo.conf.5:695:1: WARNING: skipping paragraph macro: sp after LP
mandoc: lilo.conf.5:1066:1: WARNING: skipping paragraph macro: sp after LP
mandoc: lilo.conf.5:1065:2: WARNING: skipping paragraph macro: LP empty

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Change 'b' to 'B' for a byte

Always use a (unpaddable or no-break) space between a number and an
unit (except if it is an input to a command, that prohibis that).

394:high in memory as possible, but never above 15Mb.  This is due to a BIOS
396:memory above 15Mb (up to a kernel imposed limit, around 768Mb) for

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Use \&.\|.\|.\& to represent an ellipsis (or define a string, e.g. 'EL'
for it).

531:The per-image option `password=...' (see below) applies to all images. This

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Reduce space between words.

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Use "\e" to print the escape character instead of "\\" (which gets
interpreted in copy mode).

727:in more lines using "\\" as last character of a line, e.g.
750:using "\\" as last character of a line. See example of addappend option.

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Use the word (in)valid instead of (il)legal if not related to legal matters.
See "www.gnu.org/prep/standards".

477:Legal color-scheme strings would be

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Find a repeated word

! 258 --> be

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Add a comma (or \&) after "e.g." and "i.e.", or use English words
(man-pages(7) [package "manpages"]).

191:Sets the name of the device (e.g. hard disk or partition) that contains
350:(e.g. PC/MS-DOS) are using the same disk, they may change the 
359:tracks. Also, with some disks (e.g. some large EIDE disks with address 
581:less secure than access to the console, e.g. if the line is connected 
727:in more lines using "\\" as last character of a line, e.g.
758:Like `append', but removes all other options (e.g. setting of the root
772:file system read-write later (e.g. after fsck'ing it).
1003:option, the next reboot (e.g. 
1051:are specified on the command line (e.g. 'single').  May be used

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Add a missing left italic correction after \fI or use a macro

683:    \fBimage=\fP\fI<pathname>\fP
690:    \fBother=\fP\fI<device>\fP
701:    \fBrange=\fP\fI<start>-<end>\fP
702:    \fBrange=\fP\fI<start>+<nsec>\fP
703:    \fBrange=\fP\fI<sector>\fP

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Remove superfluous quotation marks (") from the argument of a
single-font macro.

78:.I "boot:"
455:.I "install="
486:.I "menu"
715:.B "append="
719:.B "append="
722:.B "addappend="
876:.I "automatic"

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Rephrase the beginning of a sentence, if it starts with a digit (see a
style manual).

593:extended rates 19200, 38400, and 57600(56000).  115200 is allowed, but may

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The name of a man page is set in bold and the section in roman (see
man-pages(7)).

29:is read by the boot loader installer 'lilo' (see lilo(8)).
755:drivers. See man pages for \fImkinitrd(8)\fP.
841:the rdev(8) program.)
1068:lilo(8), mkinitrd(8), mknod(1), mkrescue(8), rdev(8).

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-- System Information:
Debian Release: buster/sid
  APT prefers stable-updates
  APT policy: (500, 'stable-updates'), (500, 'proposed-updates'), (500, 
'testing'), (500, 'stable')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)

Kernel: Linux 4.9.144-1 (SMP w/2 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=is_IS.iso88591, LC_CTYPE=is_IS.iso88591 (charmap=ISO-8859-1), 
LANGUAGE=is_IS.iso88591 (charmap=ISO-8859-1)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
Init: sysvinit (via /sbin/init)

Versions of packages lilo depends on:
ii  debconf [debconf-2.0]  1.5.69
ii  dpkg                   1.19.2
ii  libc6                  2.28-5
ii  libdevmapper1.02.1     2:1.02.155-1
ii  perl                   5.28.1-3

lilo recommends no packages.

Versions of packages lilo suggests:
ii  e2fsprogs  1.44.5-1

-- debconf information:
* lilo/diskid_uuid: true
  lilo/runme: false
* lilo/new-config:
  lilo/add_large_memory: false

-- 
Bjarni I. Gislason

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