Paul Gevers wrote:
>         </listitem>
> +       <listitem>
> +         <para>
> +           The <systemitem role="package">aufs-dkms</systemitem>
> +           package is not part of bullseye. Most <systemitem
> +           role="package">aufs-dkms</systemitem> users should be
> +           able to switch to kernel supported
> +           <literal>overlayfs</literal> to get similar

I think at least "kernel supported overlayfs" should have a hyphen,
possibly a definite article ("to the kernel-supported overlayfs").
Or here's an alternative phrasing:

              able to switch to <literal>overlayfs</literal>, which
              provides similar functionality with kernel support.

> +           functionality. However, it's possible to have a Debian
> +           installation on a filesystem that is not compatible with
> +           <literal>overlayfs</literal>,
> +           e.g. <literal>xfs</literal> without
> +           <literal>d_type</literal>. Users of <systemitem
> +           role="package">aufs-dkms</systemitem> are advised to
> +           migrate away from <systemitem
> +           role="package">aufs-dkms</systemitem> before upgrading
> +           to bullseye.
> +         </para>
> +       </listitem>

-- 
JBR     with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
        sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package

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