Paul Gevers wrote:
>       The security line in your APT configuration may look like:
>       <programlisting>deb https://deb.debian.org/debian-security 
> bullseye-security main contrib</programlisting>
>        </para>
> +      <para>
> +     If APT is configured using APT pinning or
> +     <literal>APT::Default-Release</literal>,

"Configured using" is a bit unclear; I think you mean

        If your APT configuration also involves pinning or 
        <literal>APT::Default-Release</literal>,

(I'm assuming APT::Default-Release users will be aware they're doing
it, presumably because they've got sources defined for more than one
release and need to specify which one is "primary")

>                                                the configuration
> +     most likely need updating as the codename of the security

"is likely to need updating", or:

                                                 it is likely to
        require adjustments as the codename of the security

> +     archive no longer matches that of the regular archive. An
> +     example of a working <literal>APT::Default-Release</literal>
> +     line for bullseye looks:

        line for bullseye looks like:

> +     <programlisting>APT::Default-Release 
> "/^bullseye(|-security|-upgrades)$/";</programlisting>
> +     which takes advantage of the undocumented feature of APT that
> +     it supports POSIX fnmatch patterns and regular expressions
> +     (inside <literal>/</literal>).
> +      </para>

Do we need to mention fnmatch patterns (AKA globs) when the example
doesn't use them?  Even if we do, we should make it clearer that
"inside /" only means regexps:

        it supports regular expressions (inside <literal>/</literal>)
        as well as glob patterns.

(Or should "glob" be in quotes, or <literal>s?)
-- 
JBR     with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
        sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package

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