Andreas Tille wroteL > Please add the following patch from the Debian Med team to the release notes:
Some English-usage suggestions: > > <title>News from Debian Med Blend</title> > > <para> > As in every release new packages in the field of life sciences and > medicine > were added. "Have been" added, and I think it works better as As in every release new packages have been added in the fields of medicine and life sciences. > The new package shiny-server might be worth extra mentioning The new package <systemitem role="package">shiny-server</systemitem> might be worth a particular mention, (Or "might be particularly worth mentioning", among other options.) > since it simplifies scientific web applications using R. (Is it worth reorganising that into something like "since it makes it simpler for scientific web applications to use R" or am I only noticing it because I'm reading in pedant mode?) > We kept on to > get > Continuous Integration support for the packages maintained by the Debian > Med > team. It's not clear whether this means that you maintained the effort and as a result got CI support or whether CI support is something you already had that you kept going. Maybe: We also kept up the effort to provide Continuous Integration support for the packages maintained by the Debian Med team. > </para><para> > The Debian Med team is continuously interested in feedback from users > specifically in the form of requesting the packaging of not yet packaged > free software or backports from new packages or higher versions in > unstable. > </para><para> This needs at least one extra comma; maybe even: The Debian Med team is always interested in feedback from users, especially in the form of requests for packaging of not-yet-packaged free software, or for backports from new packages or higher versions in unstable. (Are you *allowed* to put things in stable-backports if there's no version in stable?) > To install packages maintained by the Debian Med team, install the > metapackages named med-*, which are at version 3.8.x for Debian bookworm. > Feel free to visit the > <ulink url="https://blends.debian.org/med/tasks">Debian Med tasks > pages</ulink> > to see the full range of biological and medical software available in > Debian. > </para> This all looks good; I suppose med-* gets a <replaceable>*</replaceable> but no <systemitem role="package"> tags. -- JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package