On Sun, Apr 08, 2007 at 12:57:23AM +0200, Frans Pop wrote: ...
>Index: data/etch/README.html.in >=================================================================== >--- data/etch/README.html.in (revision 1397) >+++ data/etch/README.html.in (working copy) >@@ -293,7 +293,13 @@ > </tt> > <P> > #ifndef UNOFFEXTRAS >+#if COMPLETE > which means that this disc is number DISKNUM of a set of TOTALNUM discs. >+#else >+This image only contains those programs needed to install a system. During the >+installation you will be prompted for a network mirror from where additional >+programs will be retrieved. The new language is a little off, I think. Maybe: "During the installation you will be prompted for the location of a network mirror that contains any additional packages you wish to install." >+#endif > #if TYPEbinary > It contains programs ("binaries") for `ARCH' computers. > #if ARCHia64 && !ARCHamd64 >@@ -302,11 +308,15 @@ > please see the Debian amd64 architecture. > #endif > <P> >+#if COMPLETE > The programs on the Binary discs are ordered by popularity. The Binary-1 disc > contains the most popular programs and the installation tools; it is possible >-to install and run Debian with only the Binary-1 disc. The other discs, up to >-Binary-TOTALNUM, contain mostly special-interest programs. >-<p> >+to install and run Debian with only the Binary-1 disc. >+#if TOTALNUM > 1 >+The other discs, up to Binary-TOTALNUM, contain mostly special-interest >programs. >+#endif I think we've grown too much to claim that anything after disc#1 is just "special-interest". Is there better wording for this? >+<P> >+#endif > #if OMIT_RELEASE_NOTES > The Release Notes for "etch" are available on the <A > href="http://www.debian.org/releases/etch/releasenotes">Debian web >@@ -443,7 +453,7 @@ > HREF="http://bugs.debian.org/">bugs.debian.org</A>. > <LI>If you're reporting bugs against this disc or the installation > system, please also mention the version of this disc; this can be >-found in the file <a href="/.disk/info">/.disk/info</a>. >+found in the file <a href="./.disk/info">/.disk/info</a>. > #endif > #if OFFICIAL_VAL == 2 > <LI>This is an official release of the Debian system. Please report any >@@ -451,7 +461,7 @@ > HREF="http://bugs.debian.org/">bugs.debian.org</A>. > <LI>If you're reporting bugs against this disc or the installation > system, please also mention the version of this disc; this can be >-found in the file <a href="/.disk/info">/.disk/info</a>. >+found in the file <a href="./.disk/info">/.disk/info</a>. > #endif > > <br> >@@ -483,18 +493,18 @@ > <P> > > You can install packages from the commandline using >- <tt>apt-get</tt>. For example, if you want to install the packages >+ <tt>aptitude</tt>. For example, if you want to install the packages > `commprog' and `maxgame', you can give the command > <P> > <tt> >- apt-get install commprog maxgame >+ aptitude install commprog maxgame > </tt> > <P> > Note that you don't have to enter the complete path, or the > `<tt>.deb</tt>' extension. `Apt' will figure this out itself. > <P> >- Or use aptitude for a full screen interactive selection of available >- Debian packages. >+ Or enter just <tt>aptitude</tt> to interactively select available Debian >+ packages using a full screen user interface. > > #endif Cool otherwise. Oh, should we maybe mention synaptic/adept/whatever as well here? -- Steve McIntyre, Cambridge, UK. [EMAIL PROTECTED] "C++ ate my sanity" -- Jon Rabone -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]