On Sun, Apr 03, 2005 at 02:18:57PM +0200, Robert Millan wrote:
> On Tue, Mar 29, 2005 at 08:20:33PM +0200, Enrico Zini wrote:
> > Long description is: "This package contains the Zeiberbude server and
> > documentation.".  Considering that the name of the package is
> > "zeiberbude", I would have guessed that, thanks.
> > Please have another read of the developers-reference, section
> >   "6.5.3.2.  Description: short and extended description",
> > then by all means, try again.
> > I particular I suggest to cover what does "zeiberbude" does, and why
> > should one user need it.  Keep in mind that short and long descriptions
> > are used by people to decide if they should install the package or not.
> > All of this of course also applies to zbdesk.
> The short description reads:
>   "program for administering internet cafes. (server)"
> Doesn't that suffice?

If that suffices, then please remove the long description at all.

However, I really suggest you have a look at the developers-reference,
section "6.5.3.2.  Description: short and extended description".

I also suggest to cover what does "zeiberbude" does, and why should one
user need it.  Keep in mind that short and long descriptions are used by
people to decide if they should install the package or not.

You could write how it helps with administering internet cafÃs: does it
do firewalling, remote booting, kiosk-gui or does it keep track of how
much coffee is left in the bar?

If I run an internet cafÃ, why do I need this?


Ciao,

Enrico

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