Package: das-watchdog Version: 0.3.1-1 Severity: minor I see the following short description for das-watchdog: "general watchdog for the linux operating system that" Please don't end it with the word "that" :)
You might want to consider rephrasing the short description completely; currently it does not tell me anything I don't learn from the package name. So it's a watchdog, okay. It's presumably for Linux, considering that I'm seeing this package in Aptitude on a computer running Linux. The key question is, what is so special about this watchdog; the long description tells me this, but the short description could at least give a hint :) -- System Information: Debian Release: lenny/sid APT prefers unstable APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (500, 'testing'), (1, 'experimental') Architecture: amd64 (x86_64) Kernel: Linux 2.6.21-ibid (SMP w/2 CPU cores; PREEMPT) Locale: LANG=fi_FI.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=fi_FI.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8) Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]