Package: gnunet
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Sunday, May 20, 2007, I notified you of the beginning of a review process
concerning debconf templates for gnunet.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes are suggested, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

Please try to avoid uploading gnunet with these changes right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Sunday, June 10, 2007, when I 
will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
Friday, June 22, 2007. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

On Saturday, June 23, 2007, I will contact you again and will send a final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: lenny/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (500, 'testing'), (500, 'stable'), (1, 
'experimental')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.21-1-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- 
/home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/gnunet/gnunet.old/debian/gnunet-daemon.templates
  2007-05-14 11:51:52.502625513 +0200
+++ 
/home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/gnunet/gnunet/debian/gnunet-daemon.templates
      2007-06-07 07:51:24.710394994 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,13 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# for an advice to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
+# Obsolete, should be removed
 Template: gnunet-daemon/warning
 Type: note
 _Description: Former installation of GNUnet detected
@@ -10,6 +20,7 @@
  .
  Every personal settings will be preserved as much as possible.
 
+# Obsolete, should be removed
 Template: gnunet-daemon/failed
 Type: note
 _Description: Warning
@@ -24,6 +35,7 @@
  Please take a look and make necessary changes in it if needed after
  installation.
 
+# Obsolete, should be removed
 Template: gnunet-daemon/prior_07
 Type: note
 _Description: Upgrade from a version prior to 0.7.0
@@ -43,32 +55,26 @@
 Template: gnunet-daemon/launch_at_startup
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Launch at startup?
- Setup GNUnet as a system service. 
- .
- If you accept here, a GNUnet server will be started each time your machine
- starts.  If you decline this option, you need to launch GNUnet each time
- you want to use it.
+_Description: Should the GNUnet daemon be launched on boot?
+ If you choose this option, a GNUnet server will be started each time
+ the system is launched. Otherwise, you will need to launch
+ GNUnet each time you want to use it.
 
 Template: gnunet-daemon/gnunet_user
 Type: string
 Default: gnunet
 _Description: GNUnet user:
- Define the user owning the GNUnet daemon process.
+ Please choose the user that the GNUnet daemon process will run as.
  .
- For security reasons, it's best to create a new user exclusively for  GNUnet.
- .
- If you choose this option, that user will automatically be created  as a 
system user,
- for whom no login will be allowed.
+ This should be a dedicated account. If the specified account does not
+ already exist, it will automatically be created, with no login shell.
 
 Template: gnunet-daemon/gnunet_group
 Type: string
 Default: gnunet
 _Description: GNUnet group:
- Define the group owning the GNUnet daemon process.
- .
- For security reason, the best is to create a new group for this, and make
- sure that it owns no data beside GNUnet's ones.
+ Please choose the group that the GNUnet daemon process will run as.
  .
- Only the members of this group are allowed to start and stop the GNUnet 
server and 
- have access to GNUnet data.
+ This should be a dedicated group, not one that already owns data.
+ Only the members of this group will have access to GNUnet data, and
+ be allowed to start and stop the GNUnet server.
--- /home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/gnunet/gnunet.old/debian/control  
2007-05-14 11:51:52.502625513 +0200
+++ /home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/gnunet/gnunet/debian/control      
2007-06-04 07:44:23.875678944 +0200
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 Package: gnunet-common
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Secure, trust-based peer-to-peer framework
+Description: secure, trust-based peer-to-peer framework
  GNUnet is a peer-to-peer framework which focuses on providing security.
  All link-to-link messages in the network are confidential and authenticated.
  The framework provides a transport abstraction layer and can currently
@@ -22,13 +22,13 @@
 Package: gnunet-daemon
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, adduser, gettext (>=0.14.1-1)
-Description: Secure, trust-based peer-to-peer framework
+Description: secure, trust-based peer-to-peer framework
  GNUnet is a peer-to-peer framework which focuses on providing security.
  All link-to-link messages in the network are confidential and authenticated.
  The framework provides a transport abstraction layer and can currently
  encapsulate the peer-to-peer traffic in UDP, TCP, or SMTP messages.
  .
- This package contains the GNUnet Daemon necessary to run a GNUnet node.
+ This package contains the GNUnet daemon, needed to run a GNUnet node.
  .
   Homepage: <http://www.gnunet.org/>
 
@@ -36,13 +36,13 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, gettext (>=0.14.1-1)
 Suggests: libextractor-plugins (>= 0.5.16-1)
-Description: Secure, trust-based peer-to-peer framework
+Description: secure, trust-based peer-to-peer framework
  GNUnet is a peer-to-peer framework which focuses on providing security.
  All link-to-link messages in the network are confidential and authenticated.
  The framework provides a transport abstraction layer and can currently
  encapsulate the peer-to-peer traffic in UDP, TCP, or SMTP messages.
  .
- This package contains the GNUnet command line client applications as
+ This package contains the GNUnet command line client applications, such as
  gnunet-search and gnunet-download.
  .
   Homepage: <http://www.gnunet.org/>
@@ -50,13 +50,13 @@
 Package: gnunet-tools
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, gettext (>=0.14.1-1)
-Description: Secure, trust-based peer-to-peer framework
+Description: secure, trust-based peer-to-peer framework
  GNUnet is a peer-to-peer framework which focuses on providing security.
  All link-to-link messages in the network are confidential and authenticated.
  The framework provides a transport abstraction layer and can currently
  encapsulate the peer-to-peer traffic in UDP, TCP, or SMTP messages.
  .
- This package contains the gnunet additional tools for GNUnet like the
+ This package contains the additional tools for GNUnet such as the
  gnunet-setup graphical tool.
  .
   Homepage: <http://www.gnunet.org/>
@@ -64,13 +64,13 @@
 Package: gnunet
 Architecture: all
 Depends: gnunet-daemon (>= ${Source-Version}), gnunet-client (>= 
${Source-Version}), gnunet-tools (>= ${Source-Version})
-Description: Secure, trust-based peer-to-peer framework
+Description: secure, trust-based peer-to-peer framework
  GNUnet is a peer-to-peer framework which focuses on providing security.
  All link-to-link messages in the network are confidential and authenticated.
  The framework provides a transport abstraction layer and can currently
  encapsulate the peer-to-peer traffic in UDP, TCP, or SMTP messages.
  .
- This package is a meta package for GNUnet and depends upon gnunet-daemon,
+ This package is a meta-package for GNUnet and depends upon gnunet-daemon,
  gnunet-client and gnunet-tools.
  .
   Homepage: <http://www.gnunet.org/>
@@ -79,12 +79,12 @@
 Section: libdevel
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, gnunet-daemon (>= 
${Source-Version}), gnunet-client (>= ${Source-Version}), gnunet-tools (>= 
${Source-Version})
-Description: Secure, trust-based peer-to-peer framework
+Description: secure, trust-based peer-to-peer framework
  GNUnet is a peer-to-peer framework which focuses on providing security.
  All link-to-link messages in the network are confidential and authenticated.
  The framework provides a transport abstraction layer and can currently
  encapsulate the peer-to-peer traffic in UDP, TCP, or SMTP messages.
  .
- This package contains the development files of GNUnet.
+ This package contains the development files for GNUnet.
  .
   Homepage: <http://www.gnunet.org/>

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