Package: ppp
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Tuesday, October 02, 2007, I notified you of the beginning of a review 
process
concerning debconf templates for ppp.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes are suggested, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

Please try to avoid uploading ppp with these changes right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Tuesday, October 23, 2007, when 
I will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Tuesday, November 13, 2007. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed 
or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around <DAY25>, I will contact you again and will send a final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: lenny/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (1, 'experimental')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.22-2-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- ppp.old/debian/ppp-udeb.templates   2007-09-23 07:20:03.737360559 +0200
+++ ppp/debian/ppp-udeb.templates       2007-10-20 08:59:06.174533189 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: debian-installer/ppp-udeb/title
 Type: text
 #  Main menu item
@@ -5,43 +14,43 @@
 
 Template: ppp/no_concentrators
 Type: error
-_Description: No concentrator was found
+_Description: No PPPoE concentrator
  All network interfaces have been probed, but a PPPoE concentrator was
  not detected.
  .
- The configuration of PPPoE is aborted. It can be attempted again by
+ The configuration of PPPoE has been aborted. It can be attempted again by
  selecting the relevant menu entry.
 
 Template: ppp/interface
 Type: string
 Default: _
 Description: Interface name:
- Please enter the name of the network interface connected to your PPPoE
+ Please enter the name of the network interface connected to the PPPoE
  modem.
 
 Template: ppp/username
 Type: string
-_Description: PPP login:
+_Description: ISP account username:
  Please enter the username for the PPP connection.
  .
- This information should have been provided to you by your Internet Service
+ This information should have been provided by your Internet Service
  Provider.
 
 Template: ppp/password
 Type: password
-_Description: PPP password:
+_Description: ISP account password:
  Please enter the password for the PPP connection.
  .
- This information should have been provided to you by your Internet Service
+ This information should have been provided by your Internet Service
  Provider.
 
 Template: ppp/detect_failed
 Type: error
-_Description: No Ethernet interface found
+_Description: No Ethernet interface
  PPPoE networking cannot be configured because no Ethernet interface was
  detected.
  .
- The configuration of PPPoE is aborted. It can be attempted again by
+ The configuration of PPPoE has been aborted. It can be attempted again by
  selecting the relevant menu entry.
 
 Template: ppp/detect_progress
@@ -52,21 +61,19 @@
 Type: error
 _Description: Failed authentication
  A PPPoE connection was attempted, but the provided login information was
- incorrect. Because of this the authentication failed.
+ probably incorrect.
  .
- Please make sure you type the correct username and password.
+ Please check the username and password you provided.
  .
- The configuration of PPPoE is aborted. It can be attempted again by
+ The configuration of PPPoE has been aborted. It can be attempted again by
  selecting the relevant menu entry.
 
 Template: ppp/unhandled
 Type: error
 _Description: Unhandled error
- It seems that the attempt to create a connection resulted in an unhandled
- error. Probably there is some exceptional situation which prevents
- establishing the connection.
+ An unidentified error happened while attempting to create a connection.
  .
- The configuration of PPPoE is aborted. It can be attempted again by
+ The configuration of PPPoE has been aborted. It can be attempted again by
  selecting the relevant menu entry.
 
 Template: ppp/please_wait
--- ppp.old/debian/control      2007-09-23 07:20:03.737360559 +0200
+++ ppp/debian/control  2007-10-17 07:36:05.156425932 +0200
@@ -13,13 +13,14 @@
 Conflicts: ppp-pam, ppp-udeb, pppdcapiplugin (<= 1:3.7.2005-07-09-2), makedev 
(<< 2.3.1-56)
 Replaces: ppp-pam, ppp-udeb
 Suggests: iptables
-Description: Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) daemon
- The Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) provides a standard way to transmit
+Description: Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) - daemon
+ The Point-to-Point Protocol provides a standard way to transmit
  datagrams over a serial link, as well as a standard way for the machines
- at either end of the link (the "peers") to negotiate various optional
- characteristics of the link.  Using PPP, a serial link can be used to
- transmit Internet Protocol (IP) datagrams, allowing TCP/IP connections
- between the peers.
+ at either end of the link to negotiate various optional characteristics
+ of the link.
+ .
+ This package is most commonly used to manage a modem for dial-up or
+ certain kinds of broadband connections.
 
 Package: ppp-udeb
 XC-Package-Type: udeb
@@ -28,20 +29,23 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, ethernet-card-detection, 
ppp-modules, di-utils
 Provides: configured-network
 XB-Installer-Menu-Item: 1700
-Description: Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) daemon
- The Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) provides a standard way to transmit
+Description: Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) - package for Debian Installer
+ The Point-to-Point Protocol provides a standard way to transmit
  datagrams over a serial link, as well as a standard way for the machines
- at either end of the link (the "peers") to negotiate various optional
- characteristics of the link.  Using PPP, a serial link can be used to
- transmit Internet Protocol (IP) datagrams, allowing TCP/IP connections
- between the peers.
+ at either end of the link to negotiate various optional characteristics
+ of the link.
  .
- ppp-udeb is a minimal ppp package used by the debian-installer.
+ This package is a minimal ppp package used by the Debian Installer.
 
 Package: ppp-dev
 Section: devel
 Architecture: all
 Priority: extra
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
-Description: Selected headers from the ppp package
- Contains some files needed to build some packages related to pppd.
+Description: Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) - development files
+ The Point-to-Point Protocol provides a standard way to transmit
+ datagrams over a serial link, as well as a standard way for the machines
+ at either end of the link to negotiate various optional characteristics
+ of the link.
+ .
+ This package provides files needed to build pppd-related software.

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