Package: qingy
Version: 0.9.6-2
Severity: minor

The package description for qingy needs some small improvements.

Debian Policy's Best Packaging Practices chapter 
<URL:http://www.debian.org/doc/developers-reference/ch-best-pkging-practices> 
recommends in ยง6.2.2 that the synopsis should *not* be capitalised 
like the start of a sentence.

The correct name of X is "The X Window System" or other variants as described
on the manpage ('man X'), never "X Windows System".

The following patch addresses both these issues.

=== modified file 'debian/control'
--- debian/control      2008-07-05 07:03:22 +0000
+++ debian/control      2008-07-05 07:04:03 +0000
@@ -11,11 +11,11 @@
 Package: qingy
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, libdirectfb-extra
-Description: Framebuffer-enabled replacement for getty
+Description: framebuffer-enabled replacement for getty
  Qingy Is Not GettY
  .
  qingy is a replacement for getty that uses DirectFB to provide a fast, nice
- GUI without the overhead of the X Windows System.  It allows the user to log
+ GUI without the overhead of the X Window System.  It allows the user to log
  in and start the session of his choice (text console, gnome, kde, wmaker, 
...).
  .
  Main features:



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