Dear Debian maintainer, On Sunday, January 04, 2009, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a review action on debconf templates for openvas-server.
Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation updates. Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts. Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your development tree as long as they were reported. The attached tarball contains: - debian/changelog with the list of changes - debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions - debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s) - debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones) As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here, preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting errors have been corrected. The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control file(s) alone. Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control file(s) of your package as of Sunday, January 04, 2009. If your package was updated in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not modified such files while the review process was running, remember..:-) It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes. Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to fix this. --
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--- openvas-server.old/debian/openvas-server.templates 2009-01-04 14:15:23.000000000 +0100 +++ openvas-server/debian/openvas-server.templates 2009-02-08 07:35:37.796748972 +0100 @@ -1,48 +1,61 @@ +# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english +# team +# +# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask +# [email protected] for advice. +# +# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such +# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers. + Template: openvas-server/certificate Type: note _Description: OpenVAS daemon certificate generation You will need to provide the relevant information to create an SSL certificate for your OpenVAS daemon. Note that this information will - *NOT* be sent to echo anybody (everything stays local), but anyone + remain local to this system, but anyone with the ability to connect to your OpenVAS daemon will be able to - retrieve this information. + see it. Template: openvas-server/califetime Type: string Default: 1460 -_Description: CA certificate life time in days: - Provide the life time of the Certificate Authority used to generate +_Description: Certificate authority certificate lifetime (days): + Please choose the lifetime of the Certificate Authority certificate that + will be used to generate the OpenVAS daemon certificate. Template: openvas-server/srvlifetime Type: string Default: 365 -_Description: Server certificate life time in days: - Provide the life time of the OpenVAS daemon certificate. Notice that the - OpenVAS clients will not connect to servers with expired certificates - so set this value for as long as you want this installation to last. - You can always regenerate this certificate later by removing the certificate - file stored in /var/lib/openvas/CA/ and running 'openvas-mkcert' +_Description: Server certificate lifetime (days): + Please choose the lifetime of the OpenVAS daemon certificate. + . + OpenVAS clients will not connect to servers with expired certificates, + so you should choose a duration longer than the time you plan to run + this server. + . + This certificate can be regenerated later by removing the certificate + file stored in /var/lib/openvas/CA/ and running "openvas-mkcert". Template: openvas-server/country Type: string -_Description: Your country (two letter code): - Enter your country's two letter code. +_Description: Country (two-letter code): + Please enter the two-letter code for the country where this server resides. Template: openvas-server/province Type: string -_Description: Your state or province: - Enter the state or provice you reside in. +_Description: State or province: + Please enter the state or province where this server resides. Template: openvas-server/location Type: string -_Description: Your location: - Enter your location (e.g. town). +_Description: Location: + Please enter the location (town, for example) where this server resides. Template: openvas-server/organization Type: string Default: OpenVAS -_Description: Your organisation: - Enter the name of your organization or company. +_Description: Organization: + Please enter the name of the organization this server belongs to. --- openvas-server.old/debian/control 2009-01-04 14:15:23.000000000 +0100 +++ openvas-server/debian/control 2009-01-04 16:39:58.000000000 +0100 @@ -11,30 +11,30 @@ Architecture: any Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, openvas-plugins Suggests: openvas-client -Description: Remote network security auditor, the server - The OpenVAS Security Scanner is a security auditing tool. It makes - possible to test security modules in an attempt to find vulnerable - spots that should be fixed. +Description: remote network security auditor - server + The Open Vulnerability Assessment System is a modular security auditing + tool, used for testing remote systems for vulnerabilities that should be + fixed. . It is made up of two parts: a server, and a client. The server/daemon, openvasd, is in charge of the attacks, whereas the client, - OpenVAS-Client, provides the user a nice X11/GTK+ interface. + OpenVAS-Client, provides an X11/GTK+ user interface. . - This package contains the server. + This package provides the server. Package: openvas-server-dev Section: devel Architecture: any Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends} Recommends: libopenvas1-dev, libopenvasnasl1-dev -Description: OpenVAS server static libraries and headers - The OpenVAS Security Scanner is a security auditing tool. It makes - possible to test security modules in an attempt to find vulnerable - spots that should be fixed. +Description: remote network security auditor - static libraries and headers + The Open Vulnerability Assessment System is a modular security auditing + tool, used for testing remote systems for vulnerabilities that should be + fixed. . It is made up of two parts: a server, and a client. The server/daemon, openvasd, is in charge of the attacks, whereas the client, - OpenVAS-Client, provides the user a nice X11/GTK+ interface. + OpenVAS-Client, provides an X11/GTK+ user interface. . - This package contains the required static libraries, headers of the server. - + This package provides the static libraries and headers required for + compiling the server. --- openvas-server.old/debian/changelog 2009-01-04 14:15:23.000000000 +0100 +++ openvas-server/debian/changelog 2009-02-08 07:39:08.580746333 +0100 @@ -1,3 +1,23 @@ +openvas-server (2.0.0-2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low + + * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n- + english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #512170 + * Fix extra space in debconf templates. Closes: #514451 + * [Debconf translation updates] + * Swedish. Closes: #512667 + * Galician. Closes: #512683 + * Basque. Closes: #512752 + * Portuguese. Closes: #512790 + * Swedish. Closes: #512667 + * Czech. Closes: #513712 + * Vietnamese. Closes: #513809 + * Russian. Closes: #514047 + * French. Closes: #514312 + * Slovak. Closes: #514381 + * German. Closes: #514450 + + -- Christian Perrier <[email protected]> Sun, 18 Jan 2009 09:26:25 +0100 + openvas-server (2.0.0-1) unstable; urgency=low * New upstream release.
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