*please read on...there is important info in this mail*

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Sunday, February 01, 2009, I sent you a notification about the beginning of 
a review
action on debconf templates for zabbix.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

IMPORTANT: in the case of zabbix, it's crucial to use files I send
here. Some quirks have been found in rewritten templates (#518501) and
are corrected.... However, most translators based their translation
work on previously sent templates. So if you use the files *they*
sent, these files will become "fuzzy".

I corected this in the attached files, which is why I urge you to use
this set of files.


The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Sunday, February 01, 2009. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- zabbix.old/debian/zabbix-agent.templates    2009-01-28 08:28:42.790033979 
+0100
+++ zabbix/debian/zabbix-agent.templates        2009-02-19 07:11:52.094519708 
+0100
@@ -1,5 +1,14 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [email protected] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: zabbix-agent/server
 Type: string
 _Description: Zabbix server host address:
- Please enter the host name or the address of the Zabbix server you 
+ Please enter the host name or IP address of the Zabbix server you
  want to connect to.
--- zabbix.old/debian/zabbix-frontend-php.templates     2009-01-28 
08:28:42.715678539 +0100
+++ zabbix/debian/zabbix-frontend-php.templates 2009-03-06 18:20:00.387759120 
+0100
@@ -1,15 +1,29 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [email protected] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: zabbix-frontend-php/reconfigure-webserver
 Type: multiselect
-_Choices: apache, apache-ssl, apache-perl, apache2
+Choices: apache, apache-ssl, apache-perl, apache2
 Default: apache, apache-ssl, apache-perl, apache2
-_Description: Webserver Reconfiguration:
- Zabbix supports any web server that php4 does, but this automatic
- configuration process only supports Apache. Please select which 
- apache version you want to configure the Zabbix frontend for.
+_Description: Web server to reconfigure for Zabbix:
+ Zabbix supports any web server supported by PHP5, however only
+ Apache can be configured automatically. 
+ .
+ Please select which Apache version you want to configure the Zabbix
+ frontend for.
 
 Template: zabbix-frontend-php/restart-webserver
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Would you like to restart your webserver(s) now?
- Remember that in order to apply the changes your webserver(s) has/have to
- be restarted. 
+_Description: Restart the web server(s) now?
+ In order to apply the changes needed for Zabbix configuration, the
+ web server needs to be restarted.
+ .
+ Please choose whether you prefer doing it automatically now
+ or manually later.
--- zabbix.old/debian/control   2009-01-28 08:28:42.777882724 +0100
+++ zabbix/debian/control       2009-02-05 18:35:02.338330525 +0100
@@ -11,26 +11,19 @@
 Package: zabbix-agent
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, adduser, logrotate, ucf
-Description: software for monitoring of your networks -- agent
- Zabbix is an all-in-one 24x7 free monitoring solution for both
- commercial and non-commercial use. 
- .
- Zabbix can be installed on any UNIX platform. It acts as server that 
- monitors client systems running on different platforms as well as other
- Network devices. The Software can be used for:
- .
-  o high level monitoring of IT Services
-  o centralised monitoring of your servers and applications
-  o monitoring of SNMP-enabled devices
-  o performance monitoring (process load, network activity, disk
-    activity, memory usage, OS parameters etc.)
-  o data visualization
+Description: network monitoring solution - agent
+ Zabbix is a server/client network monitoring system with many features.
+ It can be used for:
+ .
+  - high level monitoring of IT services;
+  - centralized monitoring of your servers and applications;
+  - monitoring of SNMP-enabled devices;
+  - performance monitoring (process load, network activity, disk
+    activity, memory usage, OS parameters etc.);
+  - data visualization.
  .
- and much more.
- .
- This package provides all binaries which are needed to integrate
- a System as zabbix client.
-
+ This package provides the software needed to integrate a host as a Zabbix
+ client.
 
 Package: zabbix-server-mysql
 Architecture: any
@@ -38,27 +31,20 @@
 Recommends: mysql-server (>= 4.0.16-2), snmpd
 Suggests: zabbix-frontend-php
 Conflicts: zabbix-server-pgsql
-Description: software for monitoring of your networks -- server
- Zabbix is an all-in-one 24x7, free monitoring solution for both
- commercial and non-commercial use. 
- .
- Zabbix can be installed on any UNIX platform. It acts as server 
- that monitors client systems running on different platforms as 
- well as other Network devices. The Software can be used for:
- .
-  o high level monitoring of IT Services
-  o centralised monitoring of your servers and applications
-  o monitoring of SNMP-enabled devices
-  o performance monitoring (process load, network activity, disk
-    activity, memory usage, OS parameters etc.)
-  o data visualization
- .
- and much more.
- .
- This Package provides all binaries which are needed to run an
- Zabbix Server. The Server collects all Informations of your Zabbix 
- Client Systems and stores them in an DBMS. This Package is compiled
- with MySQL support.
+Description: network monitoring solution - server (using MySQL)
+ Zabbix is a server/client network monitoring system with many features.
+ It can be used for:
+ .
+  - high level monitoring of IT services;
+  - centralized monitoring of your servers and applications;
+  - monitoring of SNMP-enabled devices;
+  - performance monitoring (process load, network activity, disk
+    activity, memory usage, OS parameters etc.);
+  - data visualization.
+ .
+ This package provides the software needed to integrate a host as a Zabbix
+ client. It collects information from Zabbix clients and stores it in a
+ MySQL database back-end.
 
 Package: zabbix-server-pgsql
 Architecture: any
@@ -66,105 +52,75 @@
 Recommends: postgresql, snmpd
 Suggests: zabbix-frontend-php
 Conflicts: zabbix-server-mysql
-Description: software for monitoring of your networks -- server
- Zabbix is an all-in-one 24x7, free monitoring solution for both
- commercial and non-commercial use. 
- .
- Zabbix can be installed on any UNIX platform. It acts as server 
- that monitors client systems running on different platforms as 
- well as other Network devices. The Software can be used for:
- .
-  o high level monitoring of IT Services
-  o centralised monitoring of your servers and applications
-  o monitoring of SNMP-enabled devices
-  o performance monitoring (process load, network activity, disk
-    activity, memory usage, OS parameters etc.)
-  o data visualization
- .
- and much more.
- .
- This Package provides all binaries which are needed to run an
- Zabbix Server. The Server collects all Informations of your Zabbix 
- Client Systems and stores them in an DBMS. This Package is compiled
- with PostgreSQL support.
+Description: network monitoring solution - server (using PostgreSQL)
+ Zabbix is a server/client network monitoring system with many features.
+ It can be used for:
+ .
+  - high level monitoring of IT services;
+  - centralized monitoring of your servers and applications;
+  - monitoring of SNMP-enabled devices;
+  - performance monitoring (process load, network activity, disk
+    activity, memory usage, OS parameters etc.);
+  - data visualization.
+ .
+ This package provides the software needed to integrate a host as a Zabbix
+ client. It collects information from Zabbix clients and stores it in a
+ PostgreSQL database back-end.
 
 Package: zabbix-frontend-php
 Architecture: all
 Depends: apache2 | httpd, php5, php5-mysql | php5-pgsql, php5-gd, ucf, 
dbconfig-common (>= 1.8.19), ${misc:Depends} 
 Recommends: zabbix-server-mysql | zabbix-server-pgsql, mysql-server (>= 
4.0.16-2) | postgresql
-Description: software for monitoring of your servers -- php frontend
- Zabbix is an all-in-one 24x7, free monitoring solution for both
- commercial and non-commercial use. 
- .
- Zabbix can be installed on any UNIX platform. It acts as server 
- that monitors client systems running on different platforms as 
- well as other Network devices. The Software can be used for:
- .
-  o high level monitoring of IT Services
-  o centralised monitoring of your servers and applications
-  o monitoring of SNMP-enabled devices
-  o performance monitoring (process load, network activity, disk
-    activity, memory usage, OS parameters etc.)
-  o data visualization
- .
- and much more.
- .
- This Package provides the php Frontend to your Zabbix Server
- database, which displays the collected Informations of your
- Zabbix-Clients using graphs.
+Description: network monitoring solution - PHP front-end
+ Zabbix is a server/client network monitoring system with many features.
+ It can be used for:
+ .
+  - high level monitoring of IT services;
+  - centralized monitoring of your servers and applications;
+  - monitoring of SNMP-enabled devices;
+  - performance monitoring (process load, network activity, disk
+    activity, memory usage, OS parameters etc.);
+  - data visualization.
+ .
+ This package provides a web-browsable front-end to the Zabbix server, which
+ can display graphs of the data collected from clients.
 
 Package: zabbix-proxy-pgsql
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, fping, adduser, dbconfig-common 
(>= 1.8.19), logrotate
 Recommends: postgresql
 Conflicts: zabbix-proxy-mysql
-Description: software for monitoring of your networks -- proxy
- Zabbix is an all-in-one 24x7, free monitoring solution for both
- commercial and non-commercial use.
- .
- Zabbix can be installed on any UNIX platform. It acts as server
- that monitors client systems running on different platforms as
- well as other Network devices. The Software can be used for:
- .
-  o high level monitoring of IT Services
-  o centralised monitoring of your servers and applications
-  o monitoring of SNMP-enabled devices
-  o performance monitoring (process load, network activity, disk
-    activity, memory usage, OS parameters etc.)
-  o data visualization
- .
- and much more.
- .
- This Package provides all binaries which are needed to run a
- Zabbix proxy. The Server collects all Informations of your Zabbix
- Client Systems and stores them in an DBMS. This Package is compiled
- with PostgreSQL support.
+Description: network monitoring solution - proxy (using MySQL)
+ Zabbix is a server/client network monitoring system with many features.
+ It can be used for:
+ .
+  - high level monitoring of IT services;
+  - centralized monitoring of your servers and applications;
+  - monitoring of SNMP-enabled devices;
+  - performance monitoring (process load, network activity, disk
+    activity, memory usage, OS parameters etc.);
+  - data visualization.
+ .
+ This package provides the software needed to integrate a host as a Zabbix
+ proxy. It collects information from Zabbix clients and passes it to a
+ server running a MySQL database back-end.
 
 Package: zabbix-proxy-mysql
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, fping, adduser, dbconfig-common 
(>= 1.8.19), logrotate
 Recommends: mysql-server (>= 4.0.16-2)
 Conflicts: zabbix-proxy-pgsql
-Description: software for monitoring of your networks -- proxy
- Zabbix is an all-in-one 24x7, free monitoring solution for both
- commercial and non-commercial use.
- .
- Zabbix can be installed on any UNIX platform. It acts as server
- that monitors client systems running on different platforms as
- well as other Network devices. The Software can be used for:
- .
-  o high level monitoring of IT Services
-  o centralised monitoring of your servers and applications
-  o monitoring of SNMP-enabled devices
-  o performance monitoring (process load, network activity, disk
-    activity, memory usage, OS parameters etc.)
-  o data visualization
- .
- and much more.
- .
- This Package provides all binaries which are needed to run a
- Zabbix proxy. The Server collects all Informations of your Zabbix
- Client Systems and stores them in an DBMS. This Package is compiled
- with MySQL support.
-
-
+Description: network monitoring solution - proxy (using PostgreSQL)
+ Zabbix is a server/client network monitoring system with many features.
+ It can be used for:
+ .
+  - high level monitoring of IT services;
+  - centralized monitoring of your servers and applications;
+  - monitoring of SNMP-enabled devices;
+  - performance monitoring (process load, network activity, disk
+    activity, memory usage, OS parameters etc.);
+  - data visualization.
+ .
+ This package provides the software needed to integrate a host as a Zabbix
+ proxy. It collects information from Zabbix clients and passes it to a
+ server running a PostgreSQL database back-end.
--- zabbix.old/debian/changelog 2009-01-28 08:28:42.589883367 +0100
+++ zabbix/debian/changelog     2009-03-16 07:45:07.397522540 +0100
@@ -1,3 +1,25 @@
+zabbix (1:1.6.2-2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. 
+    Closes: #516074, #518501
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+    - Czech. Closes: #517172
+    - Swedish. Closes: #517200
+    - Bokmål, Norwegian. Closes: #517266
+    - Russian. Closes: #517576
+    - Italian. Closes: #517711
+    - Finnish. Closes: #518195
+    - Portuguese. Closes: #518404
+    - Basque. Closes: #518388
+    - Spanish. Closes: #518449
+    - German. Closes: #518499
+    - Japanese. Closes: #518503
+    - French. Closes: #518522
+    - Brazilian Portuguese. Closes: #519795
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[email protected]>  Thu, 19 Feb 2009 18:57:44 +0100
+
 zabbix (1:1.6.2-1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * New upstream release (Closes: #512189)

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