Package: pod2pdf
Version: 0.42-1
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

The short description line claims that pod2pdf provides a

        converts Perl Old Documentation to PDF format

This synopsis has a couple of problems.
 * There's no such thing as Perl Old Documentation.  Obviously you
   mean (Perl's) Plain Old Documentation format.
 * It's a verb phrase.  The DevRef6.2.2-compliant format is a noun
   phrase (something that fits the above "provides a..." template).
 * (Severity level "pedantic") PDF format is a PIN-numberism -
   "Portable Document Format format".  Why not just expand it?

My patch changes it to

        Plain Old Documentation to Portable Document Format converter

Your long description is fine (never mind my urge to fiddle with the
commas), but has a single minor typo: "lingua fraca".

Thanks for packaging pod2pdf!

-- System Information:
Debian Release: squeeze/sid
  APT prefers testing
  APT policy: (500, 'testing'), (50, 'unstable')
Architecture: i386 (i586)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.30.custom
Locale: LANG=en_GB.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_GB.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash

Versions of packages pod2pdf depends on:
ii  libgetopt-argvfile-perl       1.11-1     Perl module for reading script opt
ii  libpdf-api2-perl              0.73-1     module for creating or modifying P
ii  perl                          5.10.0-24  Larry Wall's Practical Extraction 
ii  perl-modules                  5.10.0-24  Core Perl modules

Versions of packages pod2pdf recommends:
ii  libfile-type-perl             0.22-1.1   determine file type using magic st
ii  libimage-size-perl            3.2-1      determine the size of images in se

pod2pdf suggests no packages.

-- no debconf information
-- 
JBR     with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
        sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
diff -ur pod2pdf-0.42.pristine/debian/control pod2pdf-0.42/debian/control
--- pod2pdf-0.42.pristine/debian/control	2009-08-11 14:41:50.000000000 +0100
+++ pod2pdf-0.42/debian/control	2009-08-11 14:44:03.000000000 +0100
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 Depends: ${perl:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, perl-modules,
   libpdf-api2-perl (>= 0.6), libgetopt-argvfile-perl
 Recommends: libimage-size-perl, libfile-type-perl
-Description: converts Perl Old Documentation to PDF format
+Description: Plain Old Documentation to Portable Document Format converter
  POD allows for the documentation of Perl code, but with
  a few tricks, e.g. when disguised as comments, it is
  applicable to many other languages, too. It resembles
@@ -27,8 +27,7 @@
  to PostScript and from there via ps2pdf to PDF.
  Its major advantage lies in the inclusion of images
  for the documentation. This renders POD suitable for
- many smallish projects as a lingua fraca for their
+ many smallish projects as a lingua franca for their
  documentation - associated with the source and separate
  documents - so texts (and graphics) can be shared more
  easily between documenters and programmers.
-

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