Package: cairo-dock
Version: 2.0.8.2-1
Severity: minor

        Hi!

 It would be nice if the long description of your package could consist
of full sentences[1]. The second sentence is missing its subject,
starting off with "It uses..." would work out.

 Also the usage of "This" at the start is a bit strange, which this?

 So long, and thanks for your great work nevertheless!
Rhonda
[1] 
<http://www.us.debian.org/doc/developers-reference/best-pkging-practices#bpp-pkg-desc>



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