Package: bugzilla3
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Please find attached changes to the README.Debian file for the bugzilla3 
package.
Feel free to apply them using the GPL if this patch appears suitable.

Regards,

Jeremiah

-- System Information:
Debian Release: 5.0.4
  APT prefers stable
  APT policy: (500, 'stable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.26-2-686 (SMP w/2 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=en_US.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_US.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash
--- README.Debian       2010-02-02 15:36:31.000000000 +0100
+++ README.Debian.bugzilla      2010-02-02 15:45:43.000000000 +0100
@@ -4,34 +4,36 @@
 Customisation
 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
-  The /etc/bugzilla3/pre-checksetup.d and post-checksetup.d directories will be
-  executed by /usr/share/bugzilla3/lib/checksetup.pl script:
+  The /etc/bugzilla3/pre-checksetup.d and post-checksetup.d directories hold 
+  scritps which will be executed by /usr/share/bugzilla3/lib/checksetup.pl:
+
   # run-parts --verbose --exit-on-error --lsbsysinit <dir>
+
   Put your own scripts into this directory.
 
-  You have also the possiblity to use your own template and skin directories.
-  Use the /etc/bugzilla3/template and /etc/bugzilla3/sinks directory for that.
-  The content will by copied 1:1 to the corresponding directories by default
-  /etc/bugzilla3/pre-checksetup.d scripts.
+  You can use your own templates and skins; put them in 
/etc/bugzilla3/template 
+  and /etc/bugzilla3/skins. This content gets copied to the corresponding 
+  directories by the /etc/bugzilla3/pre-checksetup.d scripts.
 
   User/Group and mode of files and directories are managed with 
dpkg-statoverride.
-  At installation time defaults are used. If you intent to change them please
-  use
+  If you intend to change the default values please use
+
   # dpkg-statoverride --update --add root root 0640 /etc/bugzill3/localconfig
 
-  The is something sepecial should be mentioned at this place. To manage
-  template files you have only to dpkg-statoverride the 
/var/lib/bugzilla3/template
-  directory and /var/lib/bugzilla3/template/en/default/index.html.tmpl file.
+  For template files, you'll only have to use 'dpkg-stateoverride' on the 
+  /var/lib/bugzilla3/template directory and the 
+  /var/lib/bugzilla3/template/en/default/index.html.tmpl file.
+  
   This information will be used to set the user/group and mode of all 
directories
-  and files recursive within the
+  and files recursively within the
   - /var/lib/bugzilla3/template
   - /var/lib/bugzilla3/data/template
   directories.
   Check the /etc/bugzilla3/post-checksetup.d/15restoredpkgstatoverride script 
for
   more implementation details.
-  The reason why we are doing it this way is speed because dpkg-statoverride
-  is really slow to manage as many files as the directory contains. I hope this
-  is not annoying you. Otherwise reprot a bug with an idear how to process 
this ;-)
+  The reason why we do it this way is speed, 'dpkg-statoverride' is really 
slow.
+  I hope this is not annoying to you. Otherwise reprot a bug with a 
suggestions 
+  on how to improve the situation. ;-)
 
 About GraphViz and dependency graphs ("webdotbase")
 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -43,19 +45,19 @@
 About the "urlbase" setting
 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
-  Whe bugzilla is installed for the first time, you have to edit the conffile
+  When bugzilla is installed for the first time, you have to edit the conffile
   /etc/bugzilla3/params and change the value of urlbase to something that makes
   sense according to your installation. For instance, you can set it to
   '/bugzilla3/' if you don't use VirtualHosts.
   That parameter will be used by Bugzilla for building links in a lot of 
places,
-  so take care to its value.
+  so take care to assign it a correct value.
 
 About /usr/share/bugzilla3/lib/email_in.pl (Debian Bug #528780, #549700)
 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
-  To use this software you the libemail-reply-perl and
-  libemail-mime-attachment-stripper-perl packages are required but
-  not existing for Debian. To resolve this depenceny please go throug the next
-  steps within your shell:
+  To use this software you need the libemail-reply-perl and
+  libemail-mime-attachment-stripper-perl packages. They don't yet exist in
+  Debian. To resolve this depenceny please follow these steps:
+
   $ sudo apt-get install dh-make-perl
   $ mkdir tmp
   $ cd tmp
@@ -63,9 +65,9 @@
   $ sudo dpkg -i ~/.cpan/build/libemail-reply-perl_*.deb
   $ dh-make-perl --build --cpan Email::Mime::Attachment::Stripper
   $ sudo dpkg -i ~/.cpan/build/libemail-mime-attachment-stripper-perl_*.deb
-
-  As long the libemail-reply-perl and libemail-mime-attachment-stripper-perl
-  packages are not official this steps are mandatory to be done.
+  
+  Until these two packages are officially in debian, this is the way to install
+  them.
 
   Install further packages to get email_in.pl working:
   $ sudo apt-get install libemail-mime-creator-perl libemail-date-format-perl
@@ -77,10 +79,10 @@
 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
   Installation of outstanding packages is not supported right now. Please
   refer to Suggested and Recommended packages (dpkg --status bugzilla3) to
-  get an overview about packages Perl modules.
+  get information on other needed perl modules.
 
-  Use dh-make-perl (application and package name) to install non-packages
-  Perl modules like described in the previous section.
+  You can use dh-make-perl (application and package name) to install needed
+  Perl modules as described in the previous section.
 
 How to set several VirtualHosts with this package
 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -94,20 +96,18 @@
     
     # a2enmod env
 
-  Then, you have to prepare a configuration directory for your virtual
-  host. The simpliest way is to copy the one the package created:
+  Then prepare a configuration directory for your virtual host. The simpliest 
+  way is to copy the one the package created:
   `/etc/bugzilla3'. 
   Name this new configuration directory like that:
   `/etc/bugzilla3/sites/host' where `host' is the name of your virtual host.
 
-  You have now to add a virtual host section in your Apache configuraiton 
file. 
-  This can be achieved in different ways, depending on the kind of VirtualHost
-  you want.
-
-  This package comes with two virtual host examples, located under
+  Add a virtual host section in your Apache configuraiton file. 
+  This can be done in different ways, depending on the kind of VirtualHost
+  you want. This package comes with two virtual host examples, located under
   `/usr/share/doc/bugzilla3/examples/'.
 
-  If you want a vritualhost that uses the same static files as the orginal
+  If you want a virtualhost that uses the same static files as the orginal
   package, just use the example: `vh-basic.conf'.
 
   If you'd rather have different static files for the virtual host, you can
@@ -120,8 +120,10 @@
     - X_BUGZILLA_WEBPATH wich is the prefix to prepend to every static files in
       the templates.
 
-  When you are ok with the apache configuration, you can restart it and
-  test your virtual host.
+  When you are okay with the apache configuration, you can restart it and
+  test your virtual host;
+
+  # apache2ctl graceful
 
   If you want to have specific templates for a given virtual host, that's also
   possible, just copy `/var/lib/bugzilla3/template' to
@@ -130,7 +132,7 @@
   
   At this time, you can set a different database for each virtual host,
   customize templates for another or even share the same database... Everything
-  is possible with few effort.
+  is possible with a little effort.
 
   Even though each bugzilla site will be updated with checksetup.pl, the params
   file won't be updated. The only params file that is updated during the
@@ -139,4 +141,3 @@
   Thanks to Yann Dirson for the mod_env idea.
 
 -- Raphael Bossek <boss...@debian.org>  Mon, 05 May 2008 13:07:36 +0200
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