Package: pbuilder
Version: 0.200
Severity: minor
Tags: patch
Hi,
in the documentation, I've found some errors (missing words, punctuation
...)
This patch will fix them.
Perhaps, I've found a logical error too:
http://www.netfort.gr.jp/~dancer/software/pbuilder-doc/pbuilder-doc.html#autotesting
Chapter 10:
"Automatic install-remove-upgrade-remove-install-purge-upgrade-purge
test-suite"
Is this correct? upgrade after purge?
Kind regards,
Chris
--- pbuilder-doc.xml.orig 2011-08-02 09:41:03.000000000 +0200
+++ pbuilder-doc.xml 2011-08-02 09:48:26.000000000 +0200
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@
will update the base.tgz.
It will extract the chroot, invoke <command>apt-get update</command>
and <command>apt-get dist-upgrade</command> inside the
- chroot, and then recreate the base.tgz (the base tar-ball.)
+ chroot, and then recreate the base.tgz (the base tar-ball).
</para>
<para>
It is possible to switch the distribution which the
@@ -271,8 +271,8 @@
<command>pbuilder</command> requires full root privilege
when it is satisfying the build-dependencies, but most packages do not
need root privilege to build, or even refused to build when they are built as root.
- <command>pbuilder </command> can create a user which is only used
- inside <command>pbuilder </command> and use that user id when
+ <command>pbuilder</command> can create a user which is only used
+ inside <command>pbuilder</command> and use that user id when
building, and use the <command>fakeroot</command> command
when root privilege is required.
</para>
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@
The test files are shell scripts
placed in
<filename>debian/pbuilder-test/NN_name</filename> (where
- NN is number) following run-parts standard<footnote>
+ NN is a number) following run-parts standard<footnote>
<para> See run-parts(8). For example, no '.' in file
names!
</para>
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@
</para>
<para>
Example scripts for use with pbuilder-test can be found in
- <filename>/usr/share/doc/pbuilder/examples/pbuilder-test</filename>
+ <filename>/usr/share/doc/pbuilder/examples/pbuilder-test</filename>.
</para>
</sect1>
<sect1 id="altcompiler">
@@ -786,7 +786,7 @@
<title>Logging in to pbuilder to investigate build failure</title>
<para>
It is possible to invoke a shell session after a build
- failure. Example hook script are provided as
+ failure. Example hook scripts are provided as
<filename>C10shell</filename> and
<filename>C11screen</filename> scripts. C10shell script will
start bash inside chroot, and C11screen script will start GNU
@@ -1406,7 +1406,7 @@
</sect1>
</chapter>
<chapter id="experimental">
- <title>Experimental or wish-list features of pbuilder</title>
+ <title>Experimental or wishlist features of pbuilder</title>
<para>
There are some advanced features, above that of the
basic feature of <command>pbuilder</command>, for some specific purposes.
@@ -1419,7 +1419,7 @@
the user-mode-linux <command>pbuilder</command> port.
lvmpbuilder script in the examples directory implements such port.
The scripts and documentation can be found under
- <filename>/usr/share/doc/pbuilder/examples/lvmpbuilder/</filename>
+ <filename>/usr/share/doc/pbuilder/examples/lvmpbuilder/</filename>.
</para>
</sect1>
<sect1 id="cowdancer">
@@ -1675,7 +1675,7 @@
<sect1 id="pbuilderbackgroundhistory">
<title>Possibly inaccurate Background History of pbuilder</title>
<para>
- The following is a most possibly inaccurate account of how
+ The following is a most possibly accurate account of how
<command>pbuilder</command> came to happen, and other attempts to
make something like <command>pbuilder</command> happen.
This part of the document was originally in the AUTHORS file,
