Package: mcollective
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Wednesday, September 21, 2011, I notified you of the beginning of a review 
process
concerning debconf templates for mcollective.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

However, please try to avoid uploading mcollective with these changes
right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Sunday, October 09, 2011, when I 
will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Sunday, October 30, 2011. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed or 
changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around Monday, October 31, 2011, I will contact you again and will send a final 
patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: wheezy/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 3.0.0-1-686-pae (SMP w/2 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- mcollective.old/debian/mcollective-common.templates	2011-09-17 08:42:29.783109275 +0200
+++ mcollective/debian/mcollective-common.templates	2011-10-06 07:59:36.129253172 +0200
@@ -1,31 +1,42 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: mcollective/security_psk
 Type: string
 Default: unset
-_Description: Security PSK key for all MCollective instances:
- Please specify the psk for security within your MCollective
- instances
+_Description: MCollective PSK:
+ Please specify the Pre-Shared Key that should be used between
+ MCollective instances.
 
 Template: mcollective/stomp_host
 Type: string
 Default: localhost
-_Description: Hostname of your ActiveMQ host:
- Please specify the hostname/ip address of your Message Queue
- server (Apache ActiceMQ).
+_Description: Message Queue server host:
+ Please specify the hostname or IP address of the Message Queue server
+ for MCollective.
 
 Template: mcollective/stomp_port
 Type: string
 Default: 6163
-_Description: Port of your ActiveMQ instance:
- Please specify the port of your Message Queue server (Apache ActiveMQ).
+_Description: Message Queue server port:
+ Please specify the listening port of the Message Queue server.
 
 Template: mcollective/stomp_user
 Type: string
 Default: mcollective
-_Description: STOMP user from your ActiveMQ instance:
- Please specify the username of your Message Queue server (Apache ActiveMQ).
+_Description: Message Queue server username:
+ Please specify the STOMP username that should be used with the
+ Message Queue server.
 
 Template: mcollective/stomp_password
 Type: password
 Default: marionette
-_Description: STOMP password from your ActiveMQ instance:
- Please specify the password of your Message Queue server (Apache ActiveMQ).
+_Description: Message Queue server password:
+ Please specify the STOMP password that should be used with the
+ Message Queue server.
--- mcollective.old/debian/mcollective.templates	2011-09-17 08:42:29.783109275 +0200
+++ mcollective/debian/mcollective.templates	2011-10-06 07:59:39.917345416 +0200
@@ -1,5 +1,15 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: mcollective/start_on_boot
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Should MCollective started onboot?
- Start MCollective daemon onboot.
+_Description: Start MCollective on boot?
+ Please choose whether the MCollective daemon should be started when
+ booting this machine.
--- mcollective.old/debian/control	2011-09-17 08:42:29.783109275 +0200
+++ mcollective/debian/control	2011-09-28 22:09:58.209151979 +0200
@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ruby | ruby-interpreter, mcollective-common (>= ${source:Version})
 Suggests: activemq
 Recommends: mcollective-client
-Description: build server orchestration or parallel job execution systems
- The Marionette Collective aka. mcollective is a framework
- to build server orchestration or parallel job execution systems.
+Description: Marionette Collective clustering framework - server
+ The Marionette Collective is a framework for building server
+ orchestration and parallel job execution systems.
  .
  This package contains the MCollective daemon.
 
@@ -24,36 +24,36 @@
 Architecture: all
 Suggests: mcollective
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ruby | ruby-interpreter, mcollective-common (>= ${source:Version})
-Description: build server orchestration or parallel job execution systems
- The Marionette Collective aka. mcollective is a framework
- to build server orchestration or parallel job execution system
+Description: Marionette Collective clustering framework - clients
+ The Marionette Collective is a framework for building server
+ orchestration and parallel job execution systems.
  .
- This package contains the MCollective client stuff:
-  - mco
-  - mc-rpc
-  - mc-facts
-  - mc-find-hosts
-  - mc-ping
-  - mc-call-agent
-  - mc-controller
-  - mc-inventory
+ This package provides the MCollective client utilities:
+  * mco
+  * mc-rpc
+  * mc-facts
+  * mc-find-hosts
+  * mc-ping
+  * mc-call-agent
+  * mc-controller
+  * mc-inventory
 
 Package: mcollective-common
 Architecture: all
 Suggests: mcollective-doc
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ruby | ruby-interpreter, rubygems, libstomp-ruby, libsystemu-ruby, ruby-json
-Description: build server orchestration or parallel job execution systems
- The Marionette Collective aka. mcollective is a framework
- to build server orchestration or parallel job execution systems.
+Description: Marionette Collective clustering framework - common files
+ The Marionette Collective is a framework for building server
+ orchestration and parallel job execution systems.
  .
- Common files for mcollective packages.
+ This package provides common files for MCollective.
 
 Package: mcollective-doc
 Architecture: all
 Section: doc
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Documentation for mcollective
- The Marionette Collective aka. mcollective is a framework
- to build server orchestration or parallel job execution systems.
+Description: Marionette Collective clustering framework - documentation
+ The Marionette Collective is a framework for building server
+ orchestration and parallel job execution systems.
  .
- Documentation package.
+ This package provides documentation for MCollective.

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