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dear sirs.

there are currrently 8 README files on a debian potato cd.
none of the README files is helpfull.

i strongly recommend to have exacly one README in the root
of the cd image, and have only pointer to other documentations
in there.

for example.
--cut--
Welcome to Debian GNU/Linux 2.2 "Potato"

Information on severel subject has been placed in several locations:

doc/what-is-this
        What is this cdrom, this software ?

doc/cd-manufacture
        You want to manufacute copies of this cdrom ?

install/doc/
        Documentation about installing Debian GNU/Linux and/or
        upgrading from an older version. Choose your language:

        text file       web page                language
        install.en.txt  install.en.html         english
        install.de.txt  install.de.html         deutsch
        ...             ...                     ...

doc/mirrors
        The files on this cdrom are also available on the Internet
        via ftp:// and http:// and other protocols.
        Here is a list of servers with this software, all around
        the world. Please you the machine next to you.

doc/non-US
        Cryptografik software like PGP may miss on this cdrom,
        so the cd can be exported from the USA.
        We call those software "non-US" because of the U.S. export
        restrictions you can download that software from the internet.
        This file contains a list of servers with this software.

doc/search
        Structure of this cdrom. You guide to find software
        or documents somewhere located on this cdrom.

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also i recommend:
install/ should have a README with "documentation is in doc/".
install/rawrite2.txt reads like a changelog. note usefull here.
install/boot.bat
        does this still work with win95, win98, win98se,
        win NT or win 2000 ? i guess not. 

        and todays user don't have a dos with a cdrom driver.

        on the other hand a small delphi written app or even a batch
        file with "we will know create a boot cd. do you want to continue ?
        please insert a disk labled "debian gnu/linux 2.2 "potato" rescue
        disk". and so on, that might help much more.

"rescue.bin", "root.bin" and "linux" 
the first is a disk image (better name: *.img ?), the second a raw ext2 
or minix filesystem (better name: *.fs ? rootfs.dat ?) and the third is
a kernel image (better name: vmlinuz, bzImage, zImage ?).

i strongly suggest better names.

upgrading: the install.de.txt does not know about upgrading. there should
be some text. ("don't use your old apt. don't use dpkg-multicd. please
install to the latest apt for debian gnu/linux 2.1 "slink" found in /update,
and then use the apt method with apt-cdrom to update your system.... or so..

i hope this helps, it's all i can do to help.

regards, andreas

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