Thanks a lot Jens. On Monday 23 May 2005 01:07, Jens Seidel wrote: > the attached patch contains a few minor improvements to the release > notes such as > * corrected SGML tags > * the fixed file name of README.Debian-upgrade.gz for X updates > * instructions how to hold/unhold packages using dpkg when aptitude in > not available > * an additional conditional related to kernel 2.6 (please check) > * and a few wording improvements (check these very carefully!!)
I've applied most of your patch, some things slightly differently from
your suggestions.
> - archive with similar ease to the "security.debian.org" archive, and
> + archive with similar ease as the "security.debian.org" archive, and
Hmm. Don't think so. It's "the same as", but "similar to".
> - floppy disk images, "speakup", is available for the blind.
> + floppy disk images, "speakup", is available for the blind man.
I was not sure about that myself. "The blind" seems to be an acceptable
term [1] ("the blind man" is worse IMHO).
Alternatives would be "visually impaired" or "visually handicapped".
[1] http://www.afb.org/ and http://www.nfb.org/
(The changes have not yet been committed; I want to finish something else
before I do that.)
Cheers,
Frans
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