Hector Oron wrote: > Please consider the following patch to add back emdebian section:
If it goes in, please consider the following proofreading tweaks: > +&releasename; contains the build tools for Emdebian which allow Debian > +source packages to be cross-built and shrunk to suit embedded systems. Descriptive relative clauses like this need a comma before the "which" in English. > +The Emdebian Grip 2.0 distribution itself contains trimmed down Debian > +packages sufficient to create root filesystems that can be customised for > +specific machines and machine variants. Kernels and kernel modules > +need to be provided separately in most cases. s/ised/ized/ > +The Emdebian Crush distribution support and developmenthas been dropped > +for current release. There's a missing space, obviously, and problems with articles... but what does it mean to say that development has been dropped for a stable release? I think what it's trying to say is just: Support for the Emdebian Crush distribution has been dropped for the current release. -- JBR Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)
--- en/whats-new.dbk (revision 8367) +++ en/whats-new.dbk (proofread working copy) @@ -571,6 +571,31 @@ </section> +<section id="emdebian"> +<title>Emdebian 2.0 (based on &debian; &releasename; &release;)</title> +<indexterm><primary>Emdebian</primary></indexterm> + +<para> +&releasename; contains the build tools for Emdebian, which allow Debian +source packages to be cross-built and shrunk to suit embedded systems. +</para> + +<para> +The Emdebian Grip 2.0 distribution itself contains trimmed down Debian +packages sufficient to create root filesystems that can be customized for +specific machines and machine variants. Kernels and kernel modules +need to be provided separately in most cases. +</para> + +<para> +Support for the Emdebian Crush distribution has been dropped for the +current release. +</para> + +<para> +See the <ulink url="http://www.emdebian.org/release/squeeze/grip/index.html";> +Emdebian release notes</ulink> for further information. +</para> </section> <!-- FIXME: REVIEW for Squeeze - keep highlighting? -->
