> Attached you'll find the final draft for the release announcement for
> lenny.

Sorry, I should have waited until I got to end before posting my
comments, but I thought I'd only find at most one typo. ;-)

Anyway, I'd suggest that line 59 should have "improvement" changed to
"improvements" and that line 91 should end with a period (".").

Great work, everyone!

Martin


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