Author: tille Date: 2013-03-11 14:07:26 +0000 (Mon, 11 Mar 2013) New Revision: 13171
Modified: trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/debian-med-healthcafe.pdf trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex Log: Finally worked down the corrections of Wes Davidson <david...@ling.ohio-state.edu> Modified: trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/debian-med-healthcafe.pdf =================================================================== (Binary files differ) Modified: trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex =================================================================== --- trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex 2013-03-11 13:58:06 UTC (rev 13170) +++ trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex 2013-03-11 14:07:26 UTC (rev 13171) @@ -113,21 +113,20 @@ money, and this where reality approaches, but does not attain, the fantasy of a cost-free medical IT system. -Finally we can conclude: \DebianMed tries do be the fundament on which -you can base a cheaper, more reliable and more flexible IT -infrastructure for medical care by at the same time gaining independence +In summary, \DebianMed strives to maintain the foundation on which +you can build a cheaper, more reliable and more flexible IT +infrastructure for medical care while at the same time gaining independence from proprietary companies. -As you probably know Debian itself has a lot of derivatives (Ubuntu, +As you probably know, there are many derivatives of Debian (Ubuntu, Linux Mint, etc.) -- it is actually the most derived existing Linux -distribution. The advantage of working strictly inside Debian has the -positive side effect that also all derivatives will benefit from the work -of the \DebianMed team. Sometimes there even exist strong connections -to derivatives like +distribution. The advantage of working strictly within Debian has the +positive side effect that all its derivatives profit from the work of +the \DebianMed team as well. For example, there even exist strong +connections to derivatives like \printurl{http://nebc.nerc.ac.uk/tools/bio-linux/bio-linux-7-info}{BioLinux} -which in turn is an Ubuntu derivative -but work closely together with \DebianMed to profit from our work via -Ubuntu. +is an Ubuntu derivative which which in turn is an Ubuntu derivative work +closely with \DebianMed to profit from our work via Ubuntu. % How do we work together _______________________________________________ debian-med-commit mailing list debian-med-commit@lists.alioth.debian.org http://lists.alioth.debian.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/debian-med-commit