Hi, Julien. I am not a DD, but I just saw your package.
On Apr 14 2009, Julien Valroff wrote: > * URL : http://www.pharscape.org/ozerocdoff.html The URL doesn't seem to be informative enough for an end user. > It builds these binary packages: > ozerocdoff - temporarily disables ZeroCD More consistency in the use of ZeroCD or ZERO-CD in the short and long descriptions of the package would help a lot. I didn't know what ZeroCD was and I googled and went to wikipedia even. Wikipedia doesn't have any articles that contain the "ZeroCD" keyword. Thus, I would suggest you to improve the descriptions. Also, the long description seems a bit cryptic. Furthermore, the first line of the long description seems to have a grammatical error: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - (...) The new USB Option WWAN modem device support a CDROM device, which holds (...) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Maybe there is another one further down. Also, lintian warns: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I: ozerocdoff source: debian-watch-file-is-missing P: ozerocdoff source: source-contains-prebuilt-binary ozerocdoff.o - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - In a quest for better package descriptions, Rogério Brito. -- Rogério Brito : rbr...@{mackenzie,ime.usp}.br : GPG key 1024D/7C2CAEB8 http://www.ime.usp.br/~rbrito : http://meusite.mackenzie.com.br/rbrito Projects: algorithms.berlios.de : lame.sf.net : vrms.alioth.debian.org -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-mentors-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org