2011/7/1 Benoît Knecht <benoit.kne...@fsfe.org>:
> Hi Sebastian,
>
> Sebastian Krzyszkowiak wrote:
>> I am looking for a sponsor for my package "kamerka".
>>
>> * Package name : kamerka
>> Version : 0.6-1
>> Upstream Author : Sebastian Krzyszkowiak <d...@dosowisko.net>
>> * URL : http://dos1.github.com/kamerka/
>> * License : GPLv2+
>> Section : kde
>>
>> It builds these binary packages:
>> kamerka - Take photos using your webcam and shiny animated QML interface
>
> I had a look at your package, so here are a few comments that might
> help:
>
> - Your short and long descriptions are too technical; have a look at
> [1] for the best practices.
>
> [1]
> http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/developers-reference/best-pkging-practices.html#bpp-debian-control
Changed to:
Description: shiny photo taking application
Kamerka is an KDE application, using Video4Linux to get image from webcam
and able to save photos. Features easy to use, animated user interface.
> - In debian/control, you recommend dolphin, gimp and inkscape; this is
> way too strong. In fact, I would not even suggest them, so I think
> you should drop that line entirely.
> Same thing for suggesting kdebase-workspace-bin; why would someone
> who doesn't have it installed already want to add this package with
> all its dependencies?
Kamerka displays desktop notification on taking photo with buttons to
edit it in GIMP or Inkscape, or displaying it in Dolphin. Those apps
are currently hardcoded, that's why I put them to recommends.
It also calls "kde-open" binary, which is provided by kdebase-workspace-bin.
Is it ok, or should I remove those lines?
> - You depend explicitly on a few libraries, but if your application is
> linking to them, they should be listed in ${shlibs:Depends} already.
>
> - Your debian/copyright is not DEP-5 compliant; there's no Name or
> Maintainer field, and you should use a versioned Format URL.
>
> - licensecheck reports that po/extract-messages.sh is missing a
> copyright header, and that the other files have a GPL header with an
> incorrect FSF address; please ask upstream to correct this.
>
> - You could raise the debhelper compat level to 8 in debian/compat and
> debian/control.
All above fixed.
I'll upload soon new upstream version, containing all of those fixes.
Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Kind regards
--
Sebastian Krzyszkowiak
dos
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