On Tue, Jan 10, 2012 at 2:59 PM, Neutron Soutmun <neo.neut...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Please review again > dget -x > http://mentors.debian.net/debian/pool/main/x/xiterm+thai/xiterm+thai_1.10-2.dsc More on txiterm.1: - It should be better to wrap the file at 80 columns. - Using .br to break lines manually in paragraphs is bad typography. Note that you can also use .PP if you mean to break it into new paragraph. - Wording could be improved. (See attached patch for example.) - Please update the date in the .TH line every time you revise the man page. And it should be in YYYY-MM-DD format. (See "man man-pages" for more info.) - You may also remove comment lines in the man page as Paul previously suggested. Regards, -- Theppitak Karoonboonyanan http://linux.thai.net/~thep/
--- txiterm.1.orig 2012-01-11 01:25:56.409459181 +0700 +++ txiterm.1 2012-01-11 01:49:15.697505464 +0700 @@ -25,20 +25,20 @@ .\" TeX users may be more comfortable with the \fB<whatever>\fP and .\" \fI<whatever>\fP escape sequences to invode bold face and italics, .\" respectively. -\fBtxiterm\fP is a wrapper around the \fBxiterm+thai(1)\fP program that invokes the latter program with Thai support and also loads the Thai font. -.br -All arguments to \fBtxiterm\fP are passed to xiterm+thai without processing; -.br -the \-fn option should not be specified because it is used by the wrapper. +\fBtxiterm\fP is a wrapper around the \fBxiterm+thai(1)\fP program that +invokes the latter program with proper Thai environment and font setup. +.PP +All arguments to \fBtxiterm\fP are passed as-is to xiterm+thai with additional +preset \-fn option, so that you do not need to set it again. .sp -See the xiterm+thai manual page for more information on \fIxiterm+thai-options\fP. +See the xiterm+thai manual page for more information on +\fIxiterm+thai-options\fP. .sp \fBNote: txiterm\fP needs \fBnectec18\fP - Thai TIS-620 X font from the -.br -\fBxfonts-thai-nectec\fP package to allow the program to render the proper Thai text in the terminal. +\fBxfonts-thai-nectec\fP package to allow the program to render Thai TIS-620 +text properly in the terminal. .SH SEE ALSO .BR xiterm+thai(1) -.br .SH AUTHOR txiterm was written by Chanop Silpa-Anan <cha...@debian.org>. .PP