1) Further clean up the software|work conflation, and replace 'run' with 'use' or 'be used' and software with 'works' and/or 'software and other works'
Using "software and other works" either has redundancy or apparently endorses the false assertion that software = programs. I suggest using works if we must change.
3) Commercial replaced with non-free, and deriviations allowed broadened.
This seems a more substantive change than 2 and 4. What motivates it?
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