Manoj Srivastava <sriva...@debian.org> wrote: > To cast a vote, it is necessary to send this ballot, with the text form > (which is embedded later in this ballot) filled out, to a dedicated > e-mail address, in a signed message, as described below.
Suggest restructuring to simplify:- To cast a vote, complete the text form (embedded later in this ballot) and send the completed ballot in a signed message to a dedicated e-mail address as described below. > [ ] Choice 4: Empower the release team to decide about allowing DFSG > violations [3:1] Other posts defined in the foundation documents seem to use "appoint" more than "empower" - suggested reword:- [ ] Choice 4: Appoint the release team to decide DFSG violations policy [3:1] Would be good to have message-ids or links for the proposals if they're handy. Hope that helps, -- MJR/slef My Opinion Only: see http://people.debian.org/~mjr/ Please follow http://www.uk.debian.org/MailingLists/#codeofconduct -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-vote-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org