On Wed, Aug 10, 2011 at 19:55, Christian PERRIER <bubu...@debian.org> wrote: > If that's meant to become the new package description, I'd suggest > lowercasing the synopsis (short part of the description). See the > Developer's Reference for advices and hints about writing good package > descriptions... > > I would also avoid "your desktop", unpersonnalize and use at least > "the desktop" or some other construction. > > A good idea is often to ask for a review on debian-l10n-english for > such things (I don't always suggest this to avoid overloading that > list...but our new Serbian-speaking contributors deserve extra > attention after such a successful DebConf, isn't it?).
Thank you, language master, for the tips and for the extra attention. :) I'll correct this right away, packaging is still in development. -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-wnpp-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: http://lists.debian.org/cadh3fjk_gykb7bgiqq9wqhpudbpmwts7pljtw3fobz0ppdb...@mail.gmail.com
