On Wed, 26 Feb 2014 01:17:53 -0500 Daniel Kahn Gillmor <d...@fifthhorseman.net> wrote:
[...] > slt lets a user can send TLS/SSL connections for multiple different I'd rephrase it as "lets the user direct TLS/SSL connections..." > applications to the same port and the server can forward them all to > the appropriate backend hosts depending on the intended destination. > . > slt is capable of either terminating the TLS and passing the > cleartext traffic to the origin server (if it has appropriate key > material), or just passing the through the traffic directly (if it > has no key material). I'd rephrase it as well: "..., or just passing the traffic through (if it has...". I'm not the native speaker so please be warned; but these two phrases catched my eye. Both are obviously incorrect ("lets a user can send" and "passing the through the") but I'd also change them slightly so that they read better, as showed. -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-wnpp-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: https://lists.debian.org/20140226155747.39ccfd29e34bc9734c21e...@domain007.com