On Sat, Dec 11, 2004 at 05:39:37PM +0100, Marcin Orlowski wrote:
> Package: wnpp
> Severity: wishlist
> 
> * Package name    : kwirelessmonitor
>   Version         : x.y.z
>   Upstream Author : Name <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> * URL             : http://www.example.org/
> * License         : (GPL, LGPL, BSD, MIT/X, etc.)

Missing a few bits.

>   Description     : KWirelessMonitor is a small KDE application that docks 
> into the system tray and monitors the wireless network interface

Short description is way too long and includes the name of the package (as
the first word, even).

> KWirelessMonitor is a small KDE application that docks into the system
> tray and monitors the wireless network interface
>   .
> The systray icon shows the signal quality and the bit rate using a
> "bar graph" and a "pie chart", respectively.
> In the configuration dialog, you can change the bit rate and power
> management settings of the wireless interface.
> It is also able to automatically enable power management when using
> battery power and/or automatically disable power
> management during data transfer. By default, KWirelessMonitor
> tries to automatically detect the wireless interface

You're missing a few full-stops there, too.

- Matt

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