Quoting Andrew Mitchell (ajmi...@debian.org): > Package: wnpp > Severity: wishlist > Owner: Andrew Mitchell <ajmi...@debian.org> > > > * Package name : silverstripe > Version : 2.3.1 > Upstream Author : Silverstripe Limited > * URL : http://www.silverstripe.org/ > * License : BSD > Programming Lang: PHP > Description : a flexible open source Content Management System
If that's meant to become the package's short description, I'd recommend: - dropping "open source". If the package is in Debian, it is free wrt DFSG so that become sirrelevant - dropping the leading article (discouraged by the developer's reference) - consider dropping "flexible" which is a matter of judgement whether it really is That leaves you with "Content Managemenbt System" only, which you might want to enhance to give information about what makes it special among the gazillion other CMS (please note that I have no clue about CMS....I just feel there are tons of these, which might even be untrue..:-))
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