Package: www.debian.org
Version: N/A; reported 2003-01-05
Severity: wishlist
Tags: patch

Instead of "The <a href="subscribe">list subscription web page</a> also 
contains a complete list of all the mailing lists," i would write
"The list subscription web page also contains a <a href="subscribe">complete
list of all the mailing lists</a>,"
Arguments: If you are only searching for a "complete list of all the 
mailing lists", you must read the text on the page very carefully, because
naturaly one will read all the link texts first.
If you are searching for a possibility to subscribe to a list, you will find 
the link in the previous sentence: "You can use simple web forms to 
<a href="subscribe">subscribe</a> or to <a href="unsubscribe">unsubscribe</a> 
from the lists." 

Greetings,
        Frank Lichtenheld

Index: index.wml
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< <a href="subscribe">list subscription web page</a> also contains a complete
< list of all the mailing lists, along with a short description and the
---
> list subscription web page also contains a <a href="subscribe">complete
> list of all the mailing lists</a>, along with a short description and the

-- System Information
Debian Release: 3.0
Architecture: i386
Kernel: Linux djpig 2.4.18-bf2.4 #1 Son Apr 14 09:53:28 CEST 2002 i686
Locale: LANG=de_DE, LC_CTYPE=de_DE


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