On Tue, Mar 24, 2015 at 5:50 AM, Laura Arjona Reina wrote:

> I'm attaching a patch with the new paragraph about HP.

I found the wording confusing, as it is missing "has provided".

I'd also replace "HP hardware donations" with "current HP hardware donations".

Please also indent the second paragraph as it was before.

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pabs

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