Minor nit inline, otherwise ACK.  I see you covered some of the points I
replied to in the previous patch.  It may be easier to just squash these
together into one patch - they are all tightly related anyway.

On Tue, Mar 30, 2010 at 10:36 AM, <[email protected]> wrote:

> From: Tomas Sedovic <[email protected]>
>
> Add missing dependencies (gems authlogic and rack-accept-media-types).
>
> Fix typos, small updates.
> ---
>  README.txt |   47 +++++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------
>  1 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/README.txt b/README.txt
> index 1c61496..c126498 100644
> --- a/README.txt
> +++ b/README.txt
> @@ -1,13 +1,15 @@
>  Getting the sources
>  -------------------
> -The Deltacloud projects consists of two parts: **Core** and
> **Aggregator**. Core
> -gives you the API and drivers to various cloud providers. Aggregator
> (formerly
> -known as Portal) is a web frontend to the API.
> +The Deltacloud project consists of two parts: **Core** and **Aggregator**.
> Core
> +gives you the API and drivers to various cloud providers. It also provides
> a
> +small client to the API so that you can see it in action.
>

Remove the word 'small' - this is a full client, and what we use in the
aggregator.  Small makes it sound trivial.

+
> +Aggregator (formerly known as Portal) is a web frontend to the API.
>
>  In addition, there is the **docs** repository that contains the project
>  documentation and the sources of the <http://deltacloud.org> website.
>
> -You can browse the code repositories on the web:
> +You can browse the repositories on the web:
>
>  * [core](http://git.fedorahosted.org/git/?p=deltacloud/core.git;a=summary
> )
>  * [aggregator](
> http://git.fedorahosted.org/git/?p=deltacloud/portal.git;a=shortlog;h=refs/heads/next
> )
> @@ -16,15 +18,13 @@ You can browse the code repositories on the web:
>  or download them to your computer:
>
>     $ git clone git://git.fedorahosted.org/git/deltacloud/core.git/
> -    $ git clone git://git.fedorahosted.org/git/deltacloud/portal.git/
> -    $ git clone git://git.fedorahosted.org/git/deltacloud/docs.git/
> +    $ git clone --branch next git://
> git.fedorahosted.org/git/deltacloud/portal.git/
> +    $ git clone --branch next git://
> git.fedorahosted.org/git/deltacloud/docs.git/
>
> -The development of the **docs** and **portal** takes place on the `next`
> branch:
> +Note that the development of the **docs** and **portal** takes place on
> the
> +`next` branch, which contains the latest version of the code.
>
> -    $ cd path/to/deltacloud/docs
> -    $ git checkout next
> -    $ cd ../portal
> -    $ git checkout next
> +To get the stable version, omit the `--branch next` part.
>
>
>  Installing packages
> @@ -37,8 +37,14 @@ packages may vary):
>     rubygem-daemons
>     rubygem-gettext_rails
>     rubygem-sqlite3-ruby
> -    rubygem-compass (this is not yet in Fedora, so you'll have to gem
> install)
> -    rubygem-haml (this is not yet in Fedora, so you'll have to gem
> install)
> +    rubygem-haml
> +
> +Some packages are not in Fedora yet and you have to install them using
> +[rubygems](http://rubygems.org/):
> +
> +    gem install compass
> +    gem install rack-accept-media-types
> +    gem install authlogic
>
>  If you want to develop using PostgreSQL database instead of the default
> SQLite,
>  install these, too:
> @@ -118,24 +124,23 @@ This will run the Deltacloud Core server on port
> 3001.
>
>  Setting up the Aggregator
>  -------------------------
> -Now we need to setup the Aggregator (which includes the UI).
> -As your user who will run the Aggregator:
> -
> +Now we need to setup the Aggregator. As your user who will run the
> Aggregator:
>
>  ### With SQLite ###
>
>     $ cd path/to/deltacloud/portal/src/config
>     $ cp database.sqlite database.yml
>
> -**Note:** you can edit the "database.yml" file to change the location of
> the
> -*.sqlite3 database files.
> +**Note:** you can update the paths in the "database.yml" file to change
> the
> +location of the *.sqlite3 database files.
>
>     $ rake db:create:all
>     $ rake db:migrate
>     $ cd <wherever you put it>/db
>
>  You should see the "development.sqlite3" file there. Make sure it is owned
> by
> -the user who will run the Aggregator.
> +the user who will run the Aggregator. The directory where the database
> files
> +are stored must be also writable by this user.
>
>  ### With PostgreSQL ###
>
> @@ -152,12 +157,10 @@ You can now run the UI:
>
>     $ ./script/server
>
> -Which will start up the Aggregator UI on port 3000.
> +Which will start up the Aggregator on port 3000.
>
>
>  Checking out the UI
>  -------------------
>  Now that you have all of the components running, you should be able to
> point
>  your web browser at <http://localhost:3000> and see the Aggregator page.
> -
> -**Happy hacking!**
> --
> 1.6.6.1
>
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