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Halley Pacheco de Oliveira commented on DERBY-1194: --------------------------------------------------- About John H. Embretsen's comment: In my opinion, in the sentence "The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server, with Derby as an embedded part of the application." the word "application" stands for "Derby Network Server", and the sentence could be: "The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server, with Derby as an embedded part of the Derby Network Server." or "The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server, with Derby as an embedded part of it." My opinion is based on this part of the manual: The Derby Network Server The Network Server is a solution for multiple JVMs that connect to the database, unlike the embedded scenario where only one JVM runs as part of the system. When Derby is embedded in a single-JVM application, the embedded JDBC driver calls the local Derby database. When Derby is embedded in a server framework, the server framework's connectivity software provides data to multiple client JDBC applications over a network or the Internet. PS: I will attach the HTML output along with the new correction. Thank you for the tip. > Derby Server and Administration Guide - Managing the Derby Network Server > ------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Key: DERBY-1194 > URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1194 > Project: Derby > Type: Bug > Components: Documentation > Versions: 10.1.2.3 > Environment: DITA files > Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira > Priority: Minor > Fix For: 10.1.2.3 > Attachments: cadminconfig86869.diff, cadminconfig86869.diff.html > > In this manual is written: > Managing the Derby Network Server > The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server, with Derby as an > embedded part of the application. > It can also be managed remotely from a web server by using a servlet > interface. You can manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the > command line, or the Network Server API. See Managing the Derby Network > Server remotely by using the servlet interface for information about starting > and shutting down the Network Server using the servlet interface. > It seems to me that the sentences of this last paragraph are not in the > correct order, and the first and second sentences should be swapped, > becoming: > You can manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the command line, > or the Network Server API. It can also be managed remotely from a web server > by using a servlet interface. See Managing the Derby Network Server remotely > by using the servlet interface for information about starting and shutting > down the Network Server using the servlet interface. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
