[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1207?page=all ] Andrew McIntyre reopened DERBY-1207: ------------------------------------
> Derby Server and Administration Guide - Network Server security > --------------------------------------------------------------- > > Key: DERBY-1207 > URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1207 > Project: Derby > Type: Bug > Components: Documentation > Versions: 10.1.2.3 > Environment: DITA-sourced documentation > Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira > Assignee: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira > Priority: Minor > Fix For: 10.2.0.0, 10.1.3.0, 10.1.2.3 > Attachments: cadminnetservsecurity.diff, cadminnetservsecurity.diff.html, > cadminnetservsecurity.html > > In this page is written: > 1) A server that is started with the 0.0.0.0 option will listen to client > requests that originate from both localhost and from other machines on the > network. > -> 0.0.0.0 is the IP address, the option is -h, so in my opinion the sentence > should be: > A server that is started with the -h 0.0.0.0 option will listen to client > requests that originate from both localhost and from other machines on the > network. > 2) In addition, administrative commands (for example, > org.apache.derby.drda.NetworkServerControl shutdown) can run only on the host > where the server was started, even if the server was started with the -h > option. > -> In this sentence it seems to me that "However" is better than "In > addition", because what these sentence declares is an exception ("even if the > server was started with the -h option") of what is declared in the previous > sentence, and not a simple addition. > 3) <p></p> > -> There a two empty paragraphs in the source file that can be removed. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
