As one of the people who is interested in implementing the comments that are made on the documentation, I would like to see the following :
1. Tables for each book on the wiki pages that Jean created. The columns should be: Section name, Page, Comment, Status where Section name = the name of section in the book that you are making a comment on. Page = the page number (PDF or printed) that your comment refers to. Comment = Short comments should be entered here using the guidelines on the main TenTwo Documentation page: http://wiki.apache.org/db-derby/TenTwoDocReview Longer comments should not be entered into the table. Instead a Jira issue should be created with DOCS as the first word in the title, and the number (link) for the Jira issue entered into the table. Status = This column is used by people updating the documentation to indicate when the comment is incorporated into 10.2. 2. The suggestion to divide the books up by chapter/section for the reviews is a good one. This will give the docs a more global review than just re-reviewing the information added in 10.2. With this approach it is very likely that someone will run across a section that should have been updated for 10.2 and was missed. It will also find sections that need to be improved. -- Laura Stewart
