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Kim Haase commented on DERBY-1747:
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I have a few additional questions for Francois about these pages:

In cadminapps49914.html, should the string

org.apache.derby.jdbc.ClientDataSource.ENCRYPTED_USER AND_PASSWORD_SECURITY

have an underscore instead of a space between USER and AND? Like this:

org.apache.derby.jdbc.ClientDataSource.ENCRYPTED_USER_AND_PASSWORD_SECURITY

In cadminappsclientsecurity.html, the third column of the new table row says, 
"Strong password substitution cannot be used with external Derby authentication 
schemes (i.e. LDAP)". We avoid Latin abbreviations, so I need to fix this. I 
just wanted to make sure that you meant "i.e." ("that is") instead of "e.g." 
("for example"). That is, is LDAP the only external Derby authentication 
scheme, or are there others?

Also in cadminappsclientsecurity.html, in the second column, there is a space 
after the period in the name of each property. Should that space be closed up?

Thanks!


> Documentation for 10.2 Strong Password Substitute feature
> ---------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-1747
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1747
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.0
>            Reporter: Francois Orsini
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>             Fix For: 10.2.2.0
>
>         Attachments: cadminapps49914.html, cadminapps49914.html.diffs, 
> cadminappsclientsecurity.html, cadminappsclientsecurity.html.diffs, 
> tdevcsecure82556.html, tdevcsecure82556.html.diffs
>
>
> I have attached some documentation additions for DERBY-528 (Strong Password 
> Substitute).
> Thanks in advance for any comments.
> Admin Guide:
> ------------------
>  - cadminapps49914.html
>  - cadminappsclientsecurity.html
> Developer Guide:
> ----------------------
>  - tdevcsecure82556.html
> Diffs for the HTML posted as well for each of these 3 files.
> Am not expert at DITA and the whole process of updating documentation, if 
> someone could help with updating these (small) additions to the documentation 
> trunk I would appreciate - am going through the process of editing 
> documentation as of now...Thanks in advance.

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