[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=all ]
Laura Stewart updated DERBY-2125:
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Derby Info: (was: [Patch Available])
> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
> Key: DERBY-2125
> URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
> Project: Derby
> Issue Type: Improvement
> Components: Documentation
> Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
> Environment: DITA sourced documentation
> Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
> Assigned To: Kim Haase
> Priority: Minor
> Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html,
> cgsinstallingderby.html, DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to
> http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides
> several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as
> stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to
> use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code
> that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to
> http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides
> links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official
> release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To
> find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to
> access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development
> trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html.";
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby,
> including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary
> distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby,
> including the latest official release and previous official releases binary
> and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion
> version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in
> development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think
> this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion
> version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific
> branch or the development trunk, please see the page
> http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html.";
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