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Stan Bradbury commented on DERBY-2194:
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I did a quick read through and it looks really nice. I agree that using
variables for date, version and other text that will change with new releases
is a great improvement.
Good work : )
> A few more problems with Working with Derby manual
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> Key: DERBY-2194
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2194
> Project: Derby
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: Documentation
> Reporter: Kim Haase
> Assigned To: Kim Haase
> Priority: Minor
> Fix For: 10.2.3.0
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> Attachments: DERBY-2194-2.diff, DERBY-2194-2.zip, DERBY-2194.diff,
> DERBY-2194.zip
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> After rerunning the tasks in Working With Derby, I found a few more issues.
> 1) There's a step-ordering problem: The Introduction tells users to verify
> that DERBY_HOME is set, but instructions for setting it don't appear till
> Activity 1. The instructions for setting DERBY_HOME should be moved to the
> Introduction.
> 2) In step 2 of Activity 1, add a statement that ij commands can be in either
> uppercase or lowercase, to prevent confusion when both forms are used.
> 3) Fix horizontal and vertical spacing in command and code examples.
> 4) Correct the derby.log output and description.
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