2012/1/25 Paul W. Frields <sticks...@gmail.com> > I see good things in both of these. I like Alexander's rendering but > will try to explain in more detail how I feel it could be improved. > > In gnokii's version, the trails of the exploding particles have a > softer, fuzzier look. In Alexander's, they are very fine streaks with > what I would call a higher energy -- meaning (at least to me) there > are very abrupt contrasts between one color/brightness and another. > To my eye this makes for a more distracting background, when I think > the right goal would be a beautiful but subtle background that doesn't > make itself too noticeable. Also, the center of the fireworks are > very bright, again making for possibly some excess distraction. > > However, overall Alexander's rendering does have a great feel, and > perhaps softening or blurring these exploding trails outward from the > center of each firework would help reduce the energy somewhat. I'm > not sure how much the brightness of the center of each firework could > be adjusted without sacrificing people's ability to know what they're > looking at. > > I wish I had the skill to do a version based on what I'm talking > about, but I don't. But I hope the explanation was helpful to someone > who does! >
A modified version [1] is based on the comments of Paul. I don't think what it full realisation Paul's idea. This is middle variant. [1] - http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/113 Thanks, Alexander.
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