On Friday, February 12, 2021 at 10:27:11 AM UTC-6, Ben Wilson wrote:
> I'm fine with that suggestion.
> On Fri, Feb 12, 2021 at 5:06 AM malcol...--- via dev-security-policy < 
> dev-secur...@lists.mozilla.org> wrote: 
> 
> > On Thursday, 11 February 2021 at 21:14:13 UTC, Ben Wilson wrote:
> > > 11. all incidents (as defined in section 2.4), including those reported 
> > in 
> > > Bugzilla, that were: 
> > > * disclosed by the CA or discovered by the auditor, and 
> > > * unresolved at any time during the audit period; 
> > >
> > > The idea is that all "incidents" must be reported if they were 
> > "unresolved" 
> > > - which would include those that occurred or were open - at any time 
> > during 
> > > the audit period. 
> > > 
> >
> > Wouldn't it be clearer to non-native English speakers to avoid the nuance 
> > associated with "unresolved at any time" needing to imply both those that 
> > occurred or those that were still open? 
> > 
> > Why not amend the language to just say: 
> >
> > 11. all incidents (as defined in section 2.4), including those reported in
> > Bugzilla, that: 
> > * were disclosed by the CA or discovered by the auditor, and 
> > * occurred or were open at any time during the audit period;
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This wording works from a WebTrust perspective as well.  Thanks!
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