jrgemignani commented on code in PR #240: URL: https://github.com/apache/age-website/pull/240#discussion_r1433252003
########## docs/clauses/set.md: ########## @@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ Result ## Remove a property -Normally you remove a property by using `REMOVE`, but it’s sometimes handy to do it using the `SET` command. One example is if the property comes from a parameter. +Normally a property can be removed by using `REMOVE`, but it’s users can also remove properties using the `SET` command. One example is if the property comes from a parameter. Review Comment: Wrong "it's"? ########## docs/clauses/match.md: ########## @@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ Returns any vertices connected with the `Person` 'Oliver' that are labeled `Movi ### Outgoing Edges -When the direction of an edge is of interest, it is shown by using `->` or `<-`. +To a return directed edges, you may use `->` or `<-` to specify the direction of which the edge points. Review Comment: I think you meant, "To return,..." ########## docs/clauses/match.md: ########## @@ -340,7 +340,7 @@ Returns `ACTED_IN` roles for 'Wall Street'. ### Multiple Edges -Edges can be expressed by using multiple statements in the form of `()-[]-()`, or they can be strung together. +Edges can be expressed by strung together to match an infinite number of edges. As long as the base pattern `()-[]-()` is followed, users can chain together edges and vertices to match specific patterns. Review Comment: Not sure you meant to keep in "strung". Maybe stringing? -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@age.apache.org For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: us...@infra.apache.org
