Hi,

IMHO much worse than the grammer errors are the semantic errors all over the 
places where the classes have been refactored from package X to Y without 
adjustment of their description. If these corrections are not done at the right 
time, namley when committing, then it becomes just a matter of good luck to 
catch & fix them afterwards, like the javadoc of CamelLogger.

Babak


Von meinem iPhone gesendet

Am 28.12.2011 um 16:36 schrieb Glen Mazza <gma...@talend.com>:

> Sorry, Claus, anything above 10 grammar errors activates the harsh, 
> unforgiving veto buzzer.  :)
> 
> On 12/28/2011 07:38 AM, davscl...@apache.org wrote:
> 
> Modified: camel/trunk/examples/camel-example-loadbalancing/README.txt
> URL:http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/camel/trunk/examples/camel-example-loadbalancing/README.txt?rev=1225170&r1=1225169&r2=1225170&view=diff
> ==============================================================================
> --- camel/trunk/examples/camel-example-loadbalancing/README.txt (original)
> +++ camel/trunk/examples/camel-example-loadbalancing/README.txt Wed Dec 28 
> 12:38:53 2011
> 
> 
>> +This example show how you can easily use the camel-mina component to design 
>> a solution
> This example shows , Camel-MINA
> 
>> +allowing to distribute message workload on several servers.
> allowing for distributing...    onto several servers
> 
>> +These servers are simple TCP/IP servers created by the Apache MINA 
>> framework and running in
> ...and run in...
> 
>> +separate JVMs. The load balancer pattern of Camel which is used top of them 
>> allows to
> 
> ...allows for
>> +send in a Round Robin model mode the messages created from a camel Bean 
>> component
> sending in (no "a") Round Robin mode (no "model") the messages...  Camel...
> 
>> +respectively to each server running on localhost:9991 and localhost:9992.
> 
> alternately between each server...
>> +
>> +The demo starts when every 5th seconds, a Report object is created from the 
>> camel load balancer server.
> every *5* seconds (or every 5th *second*), created *by* the *Camel*...
> 
>> +This object is send by the camel load balancer to a MINA server and object 
>> is serialized.
> 
> This object is *sent* by the *Camel* load balancer to a MINA server where it 
> is serialized.
> 
>> +One of the two MINA servers (localhost:9991 and localhost:9992) receives 
>> the object and enrich the
> *enriches*
> 
>> message
>> +by setting the field reply of the Report object. The reply is send back by 
>> the MINA server to the
> *sent* back
> 
>> client,
>> +which then logs the reply on the console.
> 
> 
> -- 
> Glen Mazza
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> 

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