Hi Rahul, Thank you for your carefully reiview of the website content. Yes, if you want to edit homepage content, just do it, it is ok, this is our project.
And also, i will fix these problems follow your instruction. -Gui Xun Long On 7/1/10, Rahul Akolkar <rahul.akol...@gmail.com> wrote: > Long, > > Thanks for updating the [scxml-eclipse] site with the user guide, its > looks great and is certainly more accessible than before. > > Some feedback: > > * Do you mind if I make some changes to the second paragraph of the > home page [1]? I want to correct a couple of typos and its also too > conversational for my taste. Such a style may work very well for the > guide and other places, but I think for the home page intro we want > something slightly more "formal". > > * The 5 min intro to SCXML [2] should simply link to the Commons > SCXML page [3] rather than having the same page here for two reasons: > (a) avoid duplication of content, harder to maintain; and (b) broken > links, such as "custom actions" at the very end. So, the guide can say > something like "for a 5 min intro, go to this other site ..." > > * Remove the "Coming soon ..." sections on the guide page [4]. We > don't anticipate APIs in the programming sense being important at the > user level for such tooling. We can add other sections when they > become available. > > * At the bottom of the guide pages, the contact is your personal > address. In general, we want discussions on the mailing list (so all > project discussions can be followed and archived etc.), so I suggest > changing to something like "... any questions or suggestions, please > send to the Commons user or dev mailing list as appropriate." (and > perhaps link to the mailing list page). Bit of an aside, at Commons, > we do list project members on the "Team" page. > > -Rahul > > [1] http://commons.apache.org/sandbox/gsoc/2010/scxml-eclipse/index.html > [2] > http://commons.apache.org/sandbox/gsoc/2010/scxml-eclipse/guide/scxml-documents.html > [3] http://commons.apache.org/scxml/guide/scxml-documents.html > [4] http://commons.apache.org/sandbox/gsoc/2010/scxml-eclipse/guide.html > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@commons.apache.org > For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@commons.apache.org > > -- Best Regards Gui Xun Long (桂训龙) --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@commons.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@commons.apache.org
