Le sam. 6 avr. 2019 à 16:59, Rob Tompkins <chtom...@gmail.com> a écrit : > > @Gilles - thoughts on this wording: > https://github.com/apache/commons-lang/commit/3f43706192b1b75c5023f165534a12b192c31442 > > <https://github.com/apache/commons-lang/commit/3f43706192b1b75c5023f165534a12b192c31442> > ?
There is a typo "the user use" -> "the user uses". Otherwise seems fair, but I'd suggest being assertive: * "We would like to further note to users" -> "Please note that [...]" * "For a more extensive treatment of random numbers" -> "For more stringent requirements (performance and/or correctness) [...]" That would give concrete hints that there is more to it than it looks. Thus, how about inserting this paragraph: --- * <p>Please note that the Apache Commons project provides a component * dedicated to pseudo-random number generation, namely * <a href="https://commons.apache.org/rng";>Commons RNG</a>, that may be * a better choice for applications with more stringent requirements (performance * and/or correctness).</p> --- ? Regards, Gilles > > -Rob --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@commons.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@commons.apache.org
