sebbASF commented on code in PR #125:
URL: https://github.com/apache/comdev-site/pull/125#discussion_r1233708999


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 the [subversion
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+## What makes a good report

Review Comment:
   good report => good board report



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 the [subversion
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+## What makes a good report
+
+As with anything you write, the most important thing to keep in mind
+when writing your board report is who your audience is.
+
+The primary audience of your report is, of course, the board of
+directors. They are not experts on your particular technology. They are,

Review Comment:
   not experts => not generally experts ?



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@@ -52,3 +52,42 @@ tool](https://whimsy.apache.org/board/agenda), or committed 
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 the [subversion
 repository](https://svn.apache.org/repos/private/foundation/board).
 
+## What makes a good report
+
+As with anything you write, the most important thing to keep in mind
+when writing your board report is who your audience is.
+
+The primary audience of your report is, of course, the board of
+directors. They are not experts on your particular technology. They are,
+rather, interested in the health and sustainability of the project.
+Questions to consider include:
+
+* Do you have enough active participants - both committers and PMC members -
+  to respond to urgent bugs or security?
+* Have you responded to any questions or comments that the board made on
+  your previous report?
+* Have you pointed out major achievements, or challenges, encountered in
+  the past quarter that an outsider would have missed?
+
+The secondary audience of your report is the general public. The minutes
+of board meetings are
+[published](https://apache.org/foundation/board/calendar.html) for our users,
+sponsors, the press, and the general public to read. Consider that
+audience when writing. For example, if there's a story that you'd like
+the press to tell about your project, you might mention it, and provide
+a quote that you'd like to see in an article.
+
+If there's something you wish to bring to the attention of the board,
+but isn't for public consumption, enclose it in <private> tags so
+that it won't be published in the public minutes.
+
+The report isn't just a once-a-quarter box to check -- It's your 

Review Comment:
   It’s => it’s



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@@ -52,3 +52,42 @@ tool](https://whimsy.apache.org/board/agenda), or committed 
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 the [subversion
 repository](https://svn.apache.org/repos/private/foundation/board).
 
+## What makes a good report
+
+As with anything you write, the most important thing to keep in mind
+when writing your board report is who your audience is.
+
+The primary audience of your report is, of course, the board of
+directors. They are not experts on your particular technology. They are,
+rather, interested in the health and sustainability of the project.
+Questions to consider include:
+
+* Do you have enough active participants - both committers and PMC members -
+  to respond to urgent bugs or security?
+* Have you responded to any questions or comments that the board made on
+  your previous report?
+* Have you pointed out major achievements, or challenges, encountered in
+  the past quarter that an outsider would have missed?
+
+The secondary audience of your report is the general public. The minutes
+of board meetings are
+[published](https://apache.org/foundation/board/calendar.html) for our users,
+sponsors, the press, and the general public to read. Consider that
+audience when writing. For example, if there's a story that you'd like
+the press to tell about your project, you might mention it, and provide
+a quote that you'd like to see in an article.
+
+If there's something you wish to bring to the attention of the board,
+but isn't for public consumption, enclose it in <private> tags so

Review Comment:
   It’s perhaps not obvious that the second tag should be </private>



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